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Re: Translation of short poem.

qa'vaj (darqang99@gmail.com)



On Sun, Jun 28, 2009 at 12:46 AM, Doq <doq@embarqmail.com> wrote:
> I like your translation, though I do wonder why something burns in the
> area of both ends, rather than more simply stating that the two ends
> are burning. The locative seems unnecessary. The ends can be subject
> of {meQ}.
>
>
>
It was a maneuver to keep {je} off of the end of the sentence.  But
combining yours and SuStel's thoughts it looks like it is definitely worth
trying to find an alternative.

Satlho' {SoH SuStel je}

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qa'vaj
qo'lIj DachenmoHtaH






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