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RE: KLBC : A somewhat advanced translation...



jatlh juDmoS:
> 'ejyo' qIjDaq, Hegh 'oHbe'bogh Hegh tu'lu', taHmo':
> wa'SaDlogh HoHlu'meH jaghpu' tu'lu' 'ej wa'SaDlogh 
> chegh jaghpu' 'ej HaghtaHbogh SuvwI'pu' tu'lu'.
> 
> From "The Final Reflection" by John M. Ford.
> Captain Krenn is explaing the Black Fleet to the 
> child Spock. He says, 
> 
> "In the Black Fleet, there is death that is not death, 
> because not the end: There is enemy to be killed a 
> thousand times, and each time return, and there 
> is laughter."
> 
> How did I do ??

Voragh has already commented on <yo'>, and the rest of it is quite good. I
particularly like <Hegh 'oHbe'bogh Hegh>. You might consider an alternative
for the last bit, though: <..., 'ej Haghlu'>. Just something to think about.


pagh
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