RE: KLBC: Hol vI'lo 'e' vInID (jav)

["Andeen, Eric" <Eric.Andeen@Sequencia.com>]

> KLBC: Hol vI'lo 'e' vInID (jav)
> 
> tera' lalDanmey law' vIHaDlI'.
> I'm studying many of Earth's religeons.

maj. wa'maH ben, DuSaQ'a'Daq jIHaDtaHvIS, lalDan HaDmeH 'eb vIjon je jIH.

> Humanpu'vaD porgh QeD ghojmoHlaw' wa' lalDan.
> One religeon apparently teachs anatomy to humans.

Daj . . .

> paQDI'norghvam ngaS bom.
> A song contains these teachings.
>
> bomvam 'ay' vIgher:
> I wrote down a part of this song:
> 
> <<'uS Hom rarba' qIv Hom.
>   qam Hom rarba' 'uS Hom.
>   yaD Hom rarba' qam Hom.
>   Dochmeyvam chenmoHmeH vumta' Qun.>>

jIHaghbe'. jItlhov neH.

> Humanpu'vaD QI'tu' ghojmoH je lalDanvam.
> This religeon also teaches humans about paradise.

net pIH.

> na'ranmey 'Iq Sopbejmo' QI'tu' mejnISchu' Humanpu'.
> The humans had to leave paradise, because they undoubtedly 
> ate too many "narans."

A small style point - it would be better style to put the <Humanpu'> after
the <Sopbejmo'> than at the end. I know it sounds better to English speakers
your way, but it sounds better to Klingon speakers if the noun goes after
the first verb.


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