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Re: <weQwIj> 'ej <ghe''or>



Irene Gates wrote:
> My candle burns at both ends;
> It will not last the night;
> But ah, my foes, and oh, my friends --
> It gives a lovely light.
> 
>     (Edna St Vincent Millay, 1920)
> 
> cha' DaqDaq meQtaH weQwIj chu';
> tugh, tlheDpa' ramvam, loj;
> 'a toH!  yIqIm, jaghpu', juppu' --
> 'IH meQtaHvIS, 'ej Doj.

baQa', do I wish you didn't have to make that a *new* candle!
But I can propose nothing better.  I'd say {rInpa' ramvam},
though, and certainly {peqIm} instead of {yIqIm}.

> jatlh 'Iwvan:
> > [...] Looking at the structure of the _terza rima_, I've got an idea
> > of a game for people who like translating rhyming and scanning stuff.[...]
> jInIDqang jIH.  qaDlIj lulaj'a' latlh?

wej.  'a qay'be', QujmeH yap je cha'.

Meanwhile a story, just to keep the subject of _Inferno_ alive
for a while yet --

qaStaHvIS tera' qo'noH cha', monDaq baHlu'mo', 'oH mejnIS SoSwI'
qorDu'.  wa' veng machDaq ghoS.  pa' DuSaQDaq vumchoH SoSwI' SoS;
_Bulgaria_ Hol ghojmoH.  'ach tInbe'mo' DuSaQ, paqghom vu' je ghaH.

wa' jaj paqyaH ghoS wa' ghot.  DuSaQDaq vum je ghaH, 'ach ghojmoHbe'.
chaq 'avwI' toy'wI' joq ghaH.  jIqawchu'be'.

SoSnI'wI'vaD jatlh:  <<ghe''or> vIlaDmeH chonob vIneH.>

SoSnI'wI' merqu' mu'meyDaj.  <qatlh <ghe''or> DaneH?>

<<QaQqu' lut> muja'lu'mo'.>

<lugh, 'ach ghaytan DatIvbe'.  chaq Dayajbe'.  paqmey law' tu'lu',
bIH Daj law' 'oH Daj puS.  DaneHchugh, may'mey Daw'mey joq Delbogh
paq qanob.>

<bIjatlh 'e' yImev! ...  <ghe''or> vIneHbej.  DaH jIHvaD yInob!>

neHba'mo', beplaHbe' SoSnI'wI'.  ghaHvaD <ghe''or> nob.

rInDI' Hogh puS, chegh ghotvetlh.  pagh jatlhtaHvIS, paq roQ 'ej
lojmIt ghoSchoH.  'ach belHa' ghaH 'e' leghmoH SoSnI'wI', mevmoH
'ej tlhob:  <paq DatIv'a'?>

qaStaHvIS lup puS tam ghaH.  <Dap jay'!> jang, QeHba'taHvIS.  <Dapna'!
qechmeyvam Davoqchugh SoH ... 'ej ghojwI'pu'vaD bIH Daja'chugh je ...>

mej, mu'tlhegh rInmoHpa'.

--'Iwvan

-- 
"mIw'e' lo'lu'ta'bogh batlh tlhIHvaD vIlIH [...]
 poH vIghajchugh neH jIH, yab boghajchugh neH tlhIH"
                                  (Lewis Carroll, "_Snark_ wamlu'")
Ivan A Derzhanski  <[email protected], [email protected]>
Dept for Math Lx,  Inst for Maths & CompSci,  Bulg Acad of Sciences
Home:  cplx Iztok  bl 91,  1113 Sofia,  Bulgaria


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