tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Fri Dec 19 13:41:01 2003
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Re: "Star Trek: The Experience" communique (STX)
Voragh wrote:
>>AFAIK, we've never seen Okrand's correct[ed] version, nor do we know
>>exactly what "errors" he caught.]
>Quvar:
>>okay. But what you show above looks at least grammatically correct to me,
>>so perhaps the "errors" he talks about were only changes, or improvements
>>- who knows..
Voragh:
>Agreed. The text is virtually perfect, but for those who want to dissect
>it, here's the complete text:
...
> laS veghaS HIltonDaq <<Hov leng: yIjeSchu'>> qaSchoHmo', bIlopqu'meH
> HIlton yIghoS.
>
> Come celebrate the grand opening of "Star Trek: The Experience" at the
> Las Vegas Hilton.
The only possible error that I see in the translation is with the above
sentence - since <<Hov leng: yIjeSchu'>> is the subject of {qaSchoHmo'}, I
would have expected the word order to be:
laS veghaS HIltonDaq qaSchoHmo' <<Hov leng: yIjeSchu'>>...
- taD