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Re: KLBC



Okay, as Yet Another Former Beginner's Grammarian, I'll take a 
stab at this. - charghwI' 'utlh

On Mon, 12 Oct 1998 05:38:01 -0700 (PDT) Thomas Staller 
<[email protected]> wrote:

> Thomas 'oH pongwIj'e'.
> My name is Thomas.

This is fine. Some of us tend to use asterisks to mark things we 
don't want someone foolishly trying to look up, though in this 
case it is obvious enough that should not be a problem. You 
might have seen this written as:

*Thomas* 'oH pongwIj'e'.

Another way of saying this, while confusing to some is:

jIHvaD *ThomaS* ponglu'.

The verb {pong) has only been shown to us in one example. In 
that example, the item being named was shown as the indirect 
object (in this case, {jIHvaD}). The name itself was the direct 
object. The subject was the group who would call the indirect 
object by the name which is the direct object. Since anyone in 
general would call you "Thomas", that subject becomes the 
generic "one", as in "One calls me 'Thomas'," which can also be 
rephrased to: "I am called 'Thomas'."

Meanwhile, grammatically simpler and just as good is your own 
choice to use the noun {pong} instead of the verb {pong}.
 
> wej thlIngan Hol vIjatlhlaHchu'be'. 'ach jIQap 'e' vInID.
> I don't speak Klingon well yet, but I attempt to succeed.

The period in the middle was not necessary, but this is fine. 
Your translation missed only slightly, since the English says, 
"I don't speak Klingon well yet," while the Klingon says, "I 
can't speak Klingon clearly yet." Meanwhile, I can cut you that 
much slack. The meaning is basically the same.
 
> jIghIQpa', Do'Ha' jabbI'IDghomvam vImejnISpu'.
> Unfortunately I needed to leave this newsgroup before I took a vacation.

There's a little controversy as to whether {mej} can take an 
object. The definition gloss "leave, depart" doesn't really 
sound like it can, and there are no examples of Okrand using it 
with an object. I know he used it in TKW on page 79, but I can't 
look that up right now, and I do know that I noted it as an 
intransitive useage.

Anyway, you can work around this:

jIghIQpa', Do'Ha' jabbI'IDghomvamvo' jImejnISpu'.

Still, that's a small error and you did well.
 
> DaH vImuvqa'. 
> Now I have rejoined it.

maj. bIcheghmo' jIbel.
 
> choqawbe' 'e' vIHar. 'ach tugh choSovbej. 
> I believe you don't remember me, but you will certainly know me soon.

Again, when you use a conjunction, like {'ach}, you tie together 
two sentences. You don't need a period before {'ach). You are 
clearly doing well enough that you won't need KLBC on your posts 
much longer.
 
> qaghelnIS.

We don't have an example yet, to my knowledge on how {ghel} is 
used. I personally tend to use the gloss "ask (a question)" to 
mean that the direct object would be a question, not the person 
to whom that question is asked. I suspect that the difference 
between {jatlh} and {ja'} is similar to the difference between 
{ghel} and {tlhob}.

Meanwhile, you could be using the "shortcut" that allows you to 
shorten what would more grammatically correctly stated:

SoHvaD jIghelnIS.

Meanwhile, I can't tell if you intentionally were using the 
shortcut or if you thought this is just correct useage and the 
direct object can be the person addressed. Even this may be 
correct, but the evidence we have up to this point does not sway 
me to this opinion.

> I just want to check, if I use the /wI'/ verb suffix correct in the
> following words:
> chenmoHlu'pu'wI' creation
> lInglu'pu'wI' product

We argued about {-lu'} and {-wI'} being combined on the same 
word (I initially took your position on this) and the general 
consensus was that it didn't work. {-wI'} refers to the subject 
of the action. {-lu'} tells us that the subject is 
inconsequential, vague or unknown. You are trying to use {-lu'} 
to point {-wI'} to the object of the verb instead of the 
subject. The group at large rejected that idea and Okrand has 
given us no indication that this clever attempt to extend the 
language works at all. Until he shows us otherwise, you can't do 
this.

> lugh'a'?

ghobe. vallaw', 'ach Qapbe'.
 
> Qapla'
> Thomas

charghwI' 'utlh



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