tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Mon Jan 26 14:53:43 1998
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Re: Babalon vaghDaq, qaStaH nuq??
- From: "William H. Martin" <[email protected]>
- Subject: Re: Babalon vaghDaq, qaStaH nuq??
- Date: Mon, 26 Jan 1998 17:53:36 -0500 (EST)
- In-Reply-To: <[email protected]> from "Marc Paige" at Jan 26, 98 10:31:26 am
charghwI'vo':
I enjoy that conversation is happening and I feel okay about
letting grammatical errors slide in these settings, but when I
see SuSvaj repeating the same error (the object of a verb with
{-lu'} PRECEEDS the verb, SuSvaj!) and then I see a second
person misusing a word ({joy'} is a VERB, NOT a NOUN), I feel a
need to intervene before people get accustomed to these errors
and it becomes pseudo-cannon/habit.
Most of this is very well written and a joy to read. This is
not an exhaustive correction. The {-lu'} thing happened in an
earlier post and again here, and the {joy'} thing pushed me
over the edge.
Well, at least you know I actually read it...
According to Marc Paige:
>
>
> ja' SuSvaj
> >>>
> qaStaHvIS jar law', *Babalon 5* vIbejpu'be', vaj lut vISovchu'be'.
> vIbejtaHvIS, tlhach noH SuvtaH tera' QI', 'ej jonlu' *Sheridon* HoD.
*Sheridon* HoD jonlu'.
> ghaH
> yu'taHvIS tera' qum, joy' lo'.
ghaH yu'taHvIS tera' qum, joy'.
> 'ach wa'Hu', *Bab 5* jabbI'ID chu' vIlegh,
> 'ej pImqu' ghu'. rInlaw tlhach noH, 'ej boq'a' 'ay' 'oHlaw' tera'.
rInlaw' tlhach noH, 'ej boq'a' 'ay' 'oHlaw' tera''e'.
> boqvam
> Qang ghaH *Sheridon*'e', 'ej ra'wI' chu' ghaj tengchaH. tlhach noH
> Qappu'law' *Sheridon* QaS, 'ach chay' 'e' ta' chaH?
...'ach chay' 'e' luta' chaH?
> 'ej nuqDaq ghaH
> *Sheridon* yaS wa'DIch'e'? *Evonavich* la'Hom 'oHlaw' pongDaj'e'. DaH
> tengchaHDaq, tu'lu'be'. jIHvaD lutvam yIQIj vay'.
> <<<
>
> toH, *Babylon 5* Dabej. qaHoy'. *Babylon 5* jabbI'IDmey vItIvqu'.
> *Babylon 5* jabbI'IDmey ngo' ngeH *TNT*, vaj lut DaSovchoHlaH.
>
> wa': vIbejtaHvIS, tlhach noH SuvtaH tera' QI', 'ej jonlu' *Sheridon* HoD.
> ghaH yu'taHvIS tera' qum, joy' lo'.
ghaH yu'taHvIS tera' qum, joy.
> QIb noH DaSov'a'? QIb noH Qap *Sheridan*. tera' Qang 'oH *Clarke*.
tera' Qang ghaH *Clarke*'e'.
> QIbmey yeq *Clarke* vaj quvHa' ghaH.
yeq QIbmey *Clark* je vaj quvHa' ghaH.
> *Sheridan* jonlu' 'e' nab *Clarke* 'ej
> pe'vIl DIS *Sheridan* 'e' nIDlu'.
pe'vIL DIS *Sheridan* net nID.
> joy' lu'lo'bej.
joy'bej.
> *Sheridan*
> luleghHa'moHbogh Herghmey lu'lo'lu' je.
Daj mu'tlhegh. Doj. maj.
> cha': rInlaw tlhach noH, 'ej boq'a' 'ay' 'oHlaw' tera'.
'ej boq'a' 'ay' 'oHlaw' tera''e'.
> HIja'. rIn tlhach noH, Hegh'egh *Clarke* Qang.
What color did he dye himself?
HoH'egh *Clarke* Qang.
> qopqIp ghaH.
nuqjatlh?
> tera'vaD tera'
> yuQ Hubmey Qeq.
> SIbDoHmey qaw' *Sheridan* Dujmey 'ej tera' choq.
SIbDoHmey Qaw' *Sheridan* Dujmey.
> boq'a' chenmoH *Sheridan*,
> *Dalen* je.
boq'a' luchemoH *Sheridan* *Dalen* je.
> pe'vIl boq'a' muv tera' qum. boq'a' chenmoH wa' vatlh qo'.
>
> wej: nuqDaq ghaH *Sheridon* yaS wa'DIch'e'? *Evonavich* la'Hom 'oHlaw'
> pongDaj'e'.
> 'ejDo' HoD ghaH *Ivanovich*'e'. logh Hop Qul.
>
> yap'a'
>
> SI'IluD
> wa'Hu' jIboghbe'
>
>
>
charghwI'