tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Wed Feb 15 10:35:51 1995
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Re: VALENTINE FOR QSEROHS!!!
- From: "William H. Martin" <[email protected]>
- Subject: Re: VALENTINE FOR QSEROHS!!!
- Date: Wed, 15 Feb 95 13:35:45 EST
- In-Reply-To: <[email protected]>; from "Christine Atherton" at Feb 14, 95 9:05 am
According to Christine Atherton:
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> tIqwI' Daghajta'
> jIyInmeH tIqwI' DapolnIS
> tIqwI' Dachaghbe' 'e' qatlhob
> 'ach reH tIqwI' DaqengtaH
> tIqlIjDaq jIyIn
> 'e' Dachaw'
> 'ej qatlho'
>
Very nice. As for proofreading, one wee detail is that you are
implying that your heart is capable of using language, but your
{bang}'s heart is not. Better to say {tIqwIj}. Also, {tlhob} is
a verb of speaking, so you don't need {'e'}.
None of this diminishes the sentiment...
> You have my heart
> For me to live, you must keep it
> I ask you not to drop it
> But to carry it, always.
> I live in your heart
> This you allow
> And I thank you.
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> [thanks to Paul for proofreading]
>
charghwI'
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