tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Sat Feb 12 18:39:47 2011
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Re: targh wambogh tlhIngan
Thank you and Voragh for the corrections and ideas about usage. I
thought it would be more error-riddled than it was. I've incorporated
all your corrections and suggestions with the exception of:
>I don't think {leS} is transitive. You could say {...leS targh Ho'Du'
>'ej yavDaq pum targh} instead.
it now says
qoreQ DeSDajDaq SoQchoH targh nuj 'ach tlhay SIjlaHpa' targh Ho'Du',
leS targh 'ej yavDaq pum.
I added the comma to prevent misparsing of Ho'Du' as the object of
leS. Kind of a long sentence: I guess I was getting excited about
finishing the story. I have an idea for another chapter, so I may
write it and share that with you too.