tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Thu May 21 20:47:18 2009
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Re: reH ru'Ha' pagh. chut 'oH
- From: Brent Kesler <[email protected]>
- Subject: Re: reH ru'Ha' pagh. chut 'oH
- Date: Thu, 21 May 2009 20:45:32 -0700
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On Thu, May 21, 2009 at 7:59 PM, Terrence Donnelly
<[email protected]> wrote:
>
> Pretty good, at first glance.
[...]
> Also, {vaj} implies a consequence, but here I think you just want the sequence of time, or {ghIq}.
Thanks. I've been making that mistake a lot lately.
reH ru'Ha' pagh. chut 'oH
HeghnIS yIn, yInnIS Hegh
rInDI' yIn, rInDI' Hegh
ghIq paghmo' belqu' Hoch
> I don't understand {-DI'} working the way you've done here. I always took it to mean "as soon as", while I think you want it to say "after", for which I'd use {-ta'DI'}.
I think {-DI'} includes {-ta'DI'} in this case. {-ta'DI'} is a little
more emphatic about when, but I think both are accurate. And I wanted
each line to be six syllables {{{;-)
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