tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Wed Jul 29 07:15:19 2009
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Re: pIqaD bom
- From: "Mark J. Reed" <[email protected]>
- Subject: Re: pIqaD bom
- Date: Wed, 29 Jul 2009 10:14:31 -0400
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On Wed, Jul 29, 2009 at 10:00 AM, <[email protected]> wrote:
> Rather than try to squeeze nine letters into the second line, where only
> seven fit, maybe this would work:
The problem there is that if you end the line with {'ot} it doesn't rhyme.
We could maybe compromise with 8 syllables in 7 beats:
'at bay chay Day 'et ghay Hay
'It jay lay may nay ngay 'ot pay
qay Qay ray
Say tay tlhay
'ut vay way yay qaghwI' je
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Mark J. Reed <[email protected]>