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Re: pIqaD bom

Mark J. Reed (markjreed@gmail.com) [KLI Member]



On Wed, Jul 29, 2009 at 10:00 AM, <MorphemeAddict@wmconnect.com> wrote:
> Rather than try to squeeze nine letters into the second line, where only
> seven fit, maybe this would work:

The problem there is that if you end the line with {'ot} it doesn't rhyme.

We could maybe compromise with 8 syllables in 7 beats:

'at bay chay Day 'et ghay Hay
'It jay lay may nay ngay 'ot pay
qay Qay ray
Say tay tlhay
'ut vay way yay qaghwI' je

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Mark J. Reed <markjreed@gmail.com>






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