> >'ej naDtaHvIS not Doy'choH. > > >This doesn't seem right. I haven't come up with an alternative yet but I > >think it needs to be changed > > Hmm, how about: > > 'ej not naDqangbe'choH. > "and it never becomes unwilling to praise him" maj. That's better. > >How about qaD? > > pagh'e' qaDmo' ghaH, ghaH'e' qaDlaH pagh maj. I like the simple flipping of O->S, S->O. DloraH