tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Fri Apr 06 09:24:19 2001
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RE: Could someone correct this for me :)
SarrIS wrote:
> From: Jason Keenan [mailto:[email protected]]
: >
: > Because of Noah
: > I am whole
: > My first born son
: > You touch me
: > My torch(light)
: > I love you
: >
: > Nowamo'
: > jInaQ
: > ghubDaQwI'
: > choDaQ
:
: choDuQ (as has already been pointed out)
:
: > SechwIj
: > qabang
:
: Definitely wrong as pointed out. Ideas to consider:
:
: tIqwIj DaghajtaH
: tuqwIj Dacho'
: bI'ut
: yInlIjvaD yInwIj 'oH
: batlhlIjvaD batlhwIj 'oH
For a tattoo? 'oy' DaSIQjaj!
To keep the line mercifully short, like the rest of the poem, how about just:
bangwI'
or even
bangwI' SoH
This last would make a good concluding line to the poem IMHO.
--
Voragh
Ca'Non Master of the Klingons