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Re: limerick attempt: cha' be'nI'pu' / KLBC



ja'pu' De'vID:
>cha' be'nI'pu'
>==============
>
>veng wa'DIch Dab cha' be'nI'pu',
>reH chaH leghDI' vay', jatlh: 'IHqu'!
>jagh HoHmeH SuvwI''a'
>betleHDaj lo'nISba',
>'ach loD HoH be'nI'pu' mInDu'.

ja' peHruS:
>lI'mer'IQvam vItIvchu'.  majQa'!  mu'tlhegh QavDaq mu' {HoH} yItam!  mu'
>{luHoH} yIlo'.  ghIq pup lI'mer'IQlIj pabDaj je.  qaDmey DIHev 'e'
>vItul.

The grammar of the last line seems fine to me -- it implies that the
"killed" men are plural, which is quite appropriate.  It's the *first*
line that requires the {lu-} prefix, unless somehow the sisters manage
to reside in more than one "First City".

-- ghunchu'wI' 'utlh




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