tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Tue Jul 15 05:44:04 1997
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Re: KLBC: Good bye (for now) and thanks!
ja' SuStel:
>> not batlhlIj' HurghchoHbe'jaj !
>> May your honor never grow dim!
>
>You've used a double-negative here, which doesn't belong. You've also
>misordered the sentence.
The sentence order in a toast like this is problematic anyway. Ritual
toasts seem to put the subject before the verb instead of after it. I
wouldn't count this line as a ritual toast, but I wanted to point out
the potential for confusion.
-- ghunchu'wI'