tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Fri Jul 11 13:45:20 1997
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Re: lutHomwIj
- From: "'elren HoD" <[email protected]>
- Subject: Re: lutHomwIj
- Date: Fri, 11 Jul 1997 13:44:46 PDT
>
>>Qo'noSDaq ram tam. ........
>...........<maj HoHvetlh> jatlh 'ej ngemDaq ngab tlhIngan SuvwI'.
>
> I got:
>It is quiet on QonoS. A lone Human walks in the forest. (He/She)
finds a
>rock. (He/She) sits on the rock. (He/She) places a cigerette in
(his/her)
>mouth and it burns. (He/She) is a rebel. (He/She) sees the moons
>brightness. The Klingon warrior walks from the forest. The Human sees
>(him/her). (He/She) says,"What do you want?" "I'm hunting and I want
>nothing" the warrior replies. (He/She) laughs. The Human drops
(his/her)
>cigerette. (He/She) jumps from the rock and (he/she) runs. The
warrior
>jumps at the Human. The warrior stabs the Human. The Human cries out
and
>(he/she) dies. The warrior stands and says,"Success!!" (He/She)
>says,"That kill was good" and the Klingon warrior disappears into the
>forest.
>
Thats all right, but you missed out a few lines... they where:
<SoH 'Iv> jatlh SuvwI'. <lotlhwI' jIH 'ej 'avwI'pu'vo'
vIqettaH> jatlh Human. <jISov> jatlh SuvwI'.
>You should have had at the beggining: "ngemDaq yIt Human loD/be' mob" A
>lone Human male/female walks in the forest". This would have left no
>confusion over male/female.
>
HIvqa' veqlargh. I thought about that.. but then it sliped my mind..
>Also,"maSDaq wov legh" I think is a little
>confusing. I would add,"maSDaq wov legh ghoH" to make it,"(He/She)
sees
>the moon's brightness". All in all, very good.
><*Cody* jatlh "Qapla 'ej qengtaH".> Cody says,"Success and carry on"
>
hmm... I don't get your last sentance...
I see the speech marks... but if you removed them and I don't remember
Klingon having them, you would have:
Succes says ,"Cody", and carry on....
There was a bit thing about "jatlh" and talking just the other day,
and thought it had to be the other way around..
>
>
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