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Re: SeQpIr, *Sonet*mey bom 123



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>Date: Tue, 21 Jan 1997 22:56:37 -0800
>From: "Kenneth Traft" <[email protected]>

Now that I've looked the original over...

>Qo', bov! "bIchoH" bImIy 'e' vIchawQo'!
>I refuse, era!  I won't permit you to brag, "You change"
>
>jIHvaD Dojbe' 'ej Dal vaS'a'lIj motlh
>It not be impressive for me and it is usual your great hall is be bored
>
>chenmoHpu'bogh HoS chu'. reH chavmey ngo'
>The new power which was formed.  Always old achievements.

I had said the head noun of the relative clause is the power; it seems it
should really be "the usual great hall(s) which your new power has built
are not impressive to me and are boring" (E: "Thy pyramids built up with
newer might / To me are nothing novel, nothing strange,")

>luSutqa'moH neH bIH; ngo'Ha', 'ach notlh.
>They only causes <Sut> again, very old, but it is obsolete

"ngo'Ha'" here seems to be more in the "wrongly" sense.  Not truly old, old
wrongly.  Not old but just obsolete (E: "They are but dressings Of a former
sight:")

>'ej jIH muSIvmoHbe' DaHjaj, Hu' po je,
>and today it cause to wonder me, the morning gets up also,

You and I both missed the "-be'" on muSivmoHbe': "Today and the morning of
days ago do *NOT* make me wonder."  (E: Not wond'ring at the present, nor
the past,)

>'ach DaH jI'Ip, 'ej batlh not mu'woQvetlh lIj.
>but now I swear, and it forgets that political power never with honor.

I wonder why "lIj" is in third person.  "mu'woQvetlh" refers to the oath,
apparently (E: This I do vow and this shall ever be,)

~mark

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