tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Mon May 27 22:21:38 1996
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A Skit: Parts One and Two
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- Subject: A Skit: Parts One and Two
- Date: Tue, 28 May 1996 01:21:07 -0400
Well, here it is again: my skit tentatively entitled "qa'no leyna' je". Got
the second part in this one, and a complete DIvI' Hol translation follows the
tlhIngan Hol. Kindly read and comment (gently, if you please, {{:)> ).
Thanks!
Barrows
a.k.a. jI'qel
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qa'no leyna' je (pong ru')
(1) 'ay' wa'
(2) leyna' ('el): QaH!
(3) qa'no : qaQaHqu'nIS'a'? (Hagh. yev. Sagh.) qaStaH nuq?
(4) leyna' :HIv jaghpu'ma'. law'.
(5) qa'no (Hob): qay'be'.
(6) leyna' (qIp): qoH SoH! chaH HoSghaj law' maH HoSghaj puS 'e' DaSov.
(7) qa'no (yuv.): yIDoH. jIH HoSghaj law' Hoch HoSghaj puS.
(8) leyna' : qoH SoH 'ej bIHegh. Dujmaj vItIj. naDev Daratlhchugh qanISbe'.
(9) qa'no : maj. yIghoS. (HIchDaj woH.)
(10) (pa' ghoS leyna'. Hagh qa'no. lojmItmey SoQmoH.)
(11) qa'no : naDev verghlu'be' Duj 'e' Sovbe'. tugh ngoDvam tu'. 'Iv qoH teH?
(12) >mev 'ay' wa' <
(13) 'ay' cha'
(14) (DujDaq qetlI' leyna'. retlhDaq jaghpu' legh. qa'no pa'Daq chegh
leyna' 'ach SoQ lojmIt tu'.)
(15) leyna' (lojmIt qIp): qa'no! lojmIt poSmoH!
(16) qa'no (Hagh.): Duj bItu'laHbe''a'?, leyna'?
(17) leyna' : jatlh 'e' mev! naDev jaghpu'! ghoS!
(18) qa'no: chotoy'chugh vaj lojmIt vIpoSmoH.
(19) leyna' (retlhDaq jaghpu' Qoy'): lu'! qatoy'! yIpoS jay'!
(20) qa'no: maj. majQa'! (lojmIt poS.)
(21) ('el leyna'.)
(22) qa'no (lojmIt SoQ): chay' jaghpu'ma' DIHoHlaH 'e' vISov. HItlhap.
(pa'Daq retlh ghoS.)
(23) (tlhap leyna'. tugh chegh chaH. jorwI' qeng qa'no. roQ.)
(24) qa'no: jaghpu'ma' Qaw' jorwI'vam. Ha'. (pegh lojmItDaq ghoS chaH.)
(25) (jolpa' ghoS leyna' je qa'no. tugh lojmIt pa'Daq latlh ghor jaghpu'.
jor jorwI'. Dej pa' ej
(26) Hegh jaghpu' law'. lojmIt pegh chaw' poStaHmo' qa'no je leyna' tlha'laH
jaghmey puS.)
(27) SuvwI' jegh (jolpa' 'el) : SIbI' pejegh! SunarghlaHbe'!
(28) qa'no: qu'vatlh! (leyna'vaD) lojmIt bISoQmoHbe'?
(29) leyna' : vISoQbejta' jay'!
(30) (HIv SuvwI'pu' jegh. wa' nuHDaj chaghmoH qa'no. SuvwI' DuQ qa'no.)
(31) qa'no :Ha'!
(32) (SuvwI' pup leyna'. SuvwI' pum 'ej DuQ je HoH leyna'. Haw' latlh.
jolvoyDaq Qam qa'no
(33) leyna' je. DujchajDaq jol.)
<mev 'ay' cha'>
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qa'no and leyna' (working title)
(1) Part One
(2) leyna' (entering): Help!
(3) qa'no: You want *me* to *help* you? (He laughs, pauses, then is serious.)
What's happening?
(4) l: Our enemies are attacking. They are many.
(5) q (Yawns.): No problem.
(6) l (hits him): You are a fool! You know they are stronger than we are.
(7) q (pushes her away): Back off. I am the strongest of them all. No one can
defeat me.
(8) l : You are a fool and you're going to die. I'm going back to our ship.
If you want to stay here, I won't stand in your way.
(9) q : Good. Get going. (picks up his gun.)
(10) (leyna' leaves the room. qa'no' laughs. He closes the doors.)
(11) q : She doesn't know that the ship is not docked here. Soon she will
discover this fact. Who is the real fool?
(12) >end part one<
(13) Part two
(14) (leyna' is running to the ship. She sees enemies nearby. She returns to
qa'no's room but discoveres the door is locked.)
(15) l (beating on the door): qa'no'! Open the door!
(16) q (Laughs.): Can't you find the ship, leyna'?
(17) l : Shut up! Enemies are here! They're coming!
(18) q : If you will serve me, I will open the door.
(19) l (hearing enemies nearby): Okay! I will serve you! Open up!
(20) q : Good. Very good! (opens the door)
(21) (leyna' enters.)
(22) q (closes the door): I know how we can kill our enemies. Come on. (He
goes into the next room.)
(23) (leyna' follows. Soon they return. qa'no' carries an explosive device.
He puts it down.)
(24) q : This explosive will destroy our enemies. Come on. (He goes through a
secret door.)
(25-26) (leyna' and qa'no go into the transporter room. Soon the enemies
break down the door in the other room. The explosive goes off. The room
collapses and many enemies die. Because qa'no and leyna' left the door open,
some enemies are able to follow them.)
(27) Enemy warrior (entering transporter room): Surrender at once! You cannot
escape!
(28) q : qu'vatlh! (to leyna') Didn't you close the door?
(29) l : I certainly did close the *@! door!
(30) (The enemy warriors attack. qa'no disarms one of them. qa'no stabs the
warrior.)
(31) q : Come on!
(32-33) (leyna' kicks a warrior. The warrior falls and leyna' stabs and kills
him. The others flee. qa'no and leyna' stand on the transporter pad. They
transport to their ship.)
<End part two>