*ticket*mey vIparqu'!

[LtBarrows@aol.com]

    qeylIS, DaHjaj *ticket*mey law'qu' vIHev!  chaq jIQIj'eghnIS.  pa'Daq
Quj jIvum.  'el nuvpu' 'ej *ticket*mey HevmeH Qujmey Quj. jIHvaD
*ticket*meychaj muqem 'ej vItogh.  vaj Dochmey DIl 'e' *ticket*mey lo'.  'ej
DaHjaj *ticket*mey law'bejqu' tu'lu'.  *ticket*mey chorghSaD loSvatlh
vItoghbej.  
     rut neH wa'logh *ticket* vIleghqa'chugh vaj jIjach 'e' vIHar. 'ach
jIjachbe'.
     neH wa' jar *ticket*mey vItoghnIS 'e' Do'.  qaSDI' wa' jar pa'
jIvumlaHbe' 'e' Do'Ha'.  vaj lenHom vItlhap.  vaj jabb'IDmey law'
vIghItlhlaH!  {{:)>

<Respectfully requesting grammar critiques in DIvI' Hol, please. Thanx.>

Lt. Barrows