tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Sat Jan 28 14:40:12 1995
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Re: tlhingan bom, 3rd try.
- From: [email protected] (David Barron)
- Subject: Re: tlhingan bom, 3rd try.
- Date: Sat, 28 Jan 1995 15:39:17 -0700 (MST)
- In-Reply-To: <[email protected]> from "William H. Martin" at Jan 28, 95 01:04:31 pm
>
> > honor.
> > baS 'oH yIn'e' mayInDI' Life is metal while we're alive
> > 'etlh moj yIn batlh maHeghDI' and becomes a sword when we die with
I was thinking of what is the best way to express charghwI's metaphore of
Living honorably being the building of a brick and dieing honorably being
the fireing of the rick. Thanks again for the Inspiration, charghwI'.
>
> majQa'! majQa'! Dunqu'! batlhna' Data'qu'!
>
> > --
> > David Barron || [email protected] || lup Hoch yIyInqu'
> > Klingon Language Postal Course || qaStaHvIS wa' lup
> > P.O. Box 37, Eagle ID 83616 || yInpu' wa'netlh yInmey
> > IT'S FREE!!! Send S.A.S.E (Not available by e-mail so don't ask!)
>
> It is difficult to express the degree to which this song
> impresses the hell out of me. Meter and rhyme without
> distorting the language....
Thanks, It was hard work.
I will make the noted correction when they seem needed.
I wanted to keep each line to seven sylables so that confines me a bit but
limitation are the bes friends of archectechs.
>
> Waaaaaaay coool.
Please wait.
I am in the proccess of writing an epic poem. Ryme is abab. Here is the
teaser first staza:
qo' bIrDaq, meQbogh qo'Daq
nIteb jach torbogh SuvwI'
qampu'DajDaq Qot vaj jaq
DaH rIn may' Heghlaw' loDnI'
Now, when I am finished should I post it here or send it to
HolQeD? chargwI', ~mark please advise.
>
> charghwI'
> --
>
> \___
> o_/ \
> <\__,\
> "> | Get a grip.
> ` |
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David Barron || [email protected] || lup Hoch yIyInqu'
Klingon Language Postal Course || qaStaHvIS wa' lup
P.O. Box 37, Eagle ID 83616 || yInpu' wa'netlh yInmey
IT'S FREE!!! Send S.A.S.E (Not available by e-mail so don't ask!)