tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Tue Oct 11 18:43:48 1994

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tachDaq 'el wa' tlhIngan




Please critique this offering:

tachDaq 'el wa' tlhIngan 'ej ba' ghaH.
mo' machqu'vo' ghew vetlh chuS'ughHom je lel 'ej ravDaq bIH roQ.
chuS'ughHom woH vetlh 'ej QoQ lIngchoH.
bomchoH ghew.
mInDu' tInqu' ghajchoH chom.
"Dunqu' wanI'," jatlh. "not wej vIlegh."
"toh yISeychu'Qo'," chomvaD jang latlh.
"wanI' cha'ghach Dun law', wanI' vIt Dun puS.
SoHvaD jInepbe'.
QIchHotlhwI' 'oH vetlh'e'."

NOTES:

{not wej}  The sense I was trying for was "never before"
{Seychu'} I was trying for the sense "too excited"
{QIchHotlhwI'} = ventriloquist (lit. voice-project-er)



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