tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Tue Nov 22 06:37:28 1994

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Re: Idea.



>Date: Mon, 21 Nov 1994 23:44:22 -0500
>Originator: [email protected]
>From: Silauren Half-Elven <[email protected]>

>On Mon, 21 Nov 1994, Johnny Wayne Jr Rittimann wrote:

>> Whether anyone does this or not, I just want to say: 
>> 
>> tlhIngan Hol vIghItlh 'e' vImevQo'! qaqoy'!  reH jabbI'IDlIj muQaH.

>well, not that its my place to correct you, but let me say a couple of 
>things here:

You're right, it's not your place to correct him.  Please read the FAQ and
give the Grammarian(s) a chance first!

>> tlhIngan Hol vIghItlh 'e' vImevQo'!

><-Qo'> is a suffix only used on imperatives; <-be'> is what you want 
>here.  <-be'> acts as the negation of most verbs, but it can't go on 
>imperatives; that's why we have <-Qo'>.  maj!

This is wrong.  It's true that -be' can't go on inmperatives, but it is not
true that -Qo' only goes on imperatives.  -Qo' indicates refusal, as
opposed to simple negation.  There is a cannon example of "bIjatlhQo'chugh"
for "If you refuse to speak."  So, I'd say "tlhIngan Hol vIghItlh 'e'
vImevQo'" is in fact excellent, better than it would have been with
"-be'":  I won't stop writing Klingon (i.e. I indent not to stop, I refuse
to stop, not just a statement of negated fact).

>> reH jabbI'IDlIj muQaH

>here, <jabbI'IDlIj> is your subject, and thus it should go *after* the 
>verb.  you've got the right pronominal prefix on the verb (<mu-> for 
>it-to-me); word order is your only mistake.  you should have 
>   <reH muQaH jabbI'IDlIj>

Unless, of course, he's talking of more than one person's messages, which
seems likely from the context, in which case "jabbI'IDraj" would be
correct.

~mark


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