tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Fri Nov 04 13:24:59 1994
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Re: A Prayer
- From: "William H. Martin" <[email protected]>
- Subject: Re: A Prayer
- Date: Fri, 4 Nov 94 16:24:44 EST
- In-Reply-To: <[email protected]>; from "Bill Willmerdinger" at Nov 4, 94 8:01 am
Way nice try. Except for word order and a prefix or two, this
is pretty much right.
According to Bill Willmerdinger:
>
> qeylIS,
> jIchoHlaHbe'bogh Dochmey vIlaj 'e' chaw'bogh jottaHghach HInob,
The things are the object of the verb "change", so the first
two words are reversed and the prefix is wrong. The rest of
this line is right. Also, {wanI'mey} might be a better word
choice than {Dochmey}.
> jIchoHlaHbogh Dochmey vIchoH 'e' chaw'bogh toDuj HInob,
Exactly the same problem here.
> 'ej muberghmoHpu'mo' jIHoHnISbogh ghotpu'vetlh porghDu' vISo' 'e' chaw'bogh
Same problem here with the 3rd - 5th words.
> yoj QaQ HInob
Corrected, this all becomes:
qeylIS,
wanI'mey vIchoHlaHbe'bogh vIlaj 'e' chaw'bogh jottaHghach HInob,
wanI'mey vIchoHlaHbogh vIchoH 'e' chaw'bogh toDuj HInob,
'ej muberghmoHpu'mo' ghotpu'vetlh porghDu' vIHoHnISbogh vISo'
'e' chaw'bogh yoj QaQ HInob.
>
> Qob
>
> .. bInajtaHvIS qeylIS Daghomjaj
>
maj.
charghwI'