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Re: [Tlhingan-hol] nuq bop bom: 'ay' wa'vatlh wejmaH vagh: <potlh QonoS>

ghunchu'wI' 'utlh ([email protected])



On Sun, Jan 22, 2012 at 1:09 AM, Qov <[email protected]> wrote:
> jatlh Sa', "wo'vaD lI''a' je romuluSngan be'pu' mIlloghmey?" 'op romuluSngan
> Hol Se'vIrmey much.

(pImlaw' romuluSngan be' porgh, ja'pu' rorbogh Sa' pIm)

> QIj vajar. lengtaHvIS romuluSngan chuQun, qum yaSpu' je,
> pegh jeychaj. pIj luSuchmo' parmaqqaychaj, loDpu' potlh ghochmeH, be'pu'vam
> noy ghoch.

mu' qID vIchenmoH 'e' vInID. <Huch yItlha'> vIqalmoH vIneH 'ach
jIQutqu' vIneHbe'.

> Se'vIrmey cha' vajar. ghe'naQ bomwI'vam ngaghtaH yuQ qumwI'[105].
> yo' 'aj SuchtaH Sutmey tuQbe'bogh nga'chuqqangqu'law'wI'vam'e'[113].

If {-taH} here is intended to describe a continual or habitual action
rather than a continuous one, I think it's better left off.

> De'vetlh SuqmeH joS Se'vIrmey Suqta'. vagh ben mIwvam val 'oghta' 'ungya.
> QonoSDaq De' law' lIngta'bogh poj much vajar. QochlaHbe' Sa'.

QochlaH 'ach tlhochlaHbe'.

> na'SIqya'ngan nach Hom much la'. pIHbej boqwI' nach.

naDev <nub> qaq law' <pIH> qaq puS 'e' vIchup.

> Do' ghuHmoHmo' Hota'ro'
> ghu'vam qelta' vajar vaj bItbe'chu'. QonoSDaq HoHvetlh qonta' 'ej 'ungya pa'
> tlhoy'Daq HoHvetlh mIllogh nuDlu'chugh 'oHDaq HovpoH leghlu'.

De' qar qonta'mo' Hub'eghlaHba' vajar.

> jatlh vajar, "Dochmeyvam DISo'pu'be'. nuq So'law'pu' vay'?"
>
> ngaSwI' mach much la'. qaStaHvIS wa'maH wa' ben leghbe'pu' 'ach SIbI' ghov.
> "nuqDaq boSamta'?" jatlh vajar.
>
> "ghojunQo'!" jatlh Hung la'. SID Hergh chaw' Hutlhmo' Hat Herghvetlh, 'ej
> ghajmeH meq Hutlh vajar. QIj vajar. ghaytan HoDpa' rav bIngDaq lutu'pu'.
> be'nalDaj cha'DIch Hergh ngaS. yatlhtaHvIS nobta' Qel. chaw' ghajpu'.
> be'nalvetlh QI' taDaq chaw' qonlu'.
>
> "puqpu' DaHutlh bIjatlhpu'," jatlh qImyal.
>
> "puqpu' vIghajbe'," jatlh vajar. "yatlhtaHvIS HoH jagh. boghpu'chuq puq DaH
> wa'maH ben boghpu'."

boghpu'chugh

> vajar yaS wa'DIch ghaHpu' be'nalvetlh'e'. DaH beqpu'Daj ngaghQo'.
>
> ratlh pagh. ngeb Hoch vajar HeSmeyqoq. Qamqu' vajar.

ghaytan moghqu' qImyal.

> loQ ghopDaj vIHmoHDI' Sa', vajar 'uchHa' 'avwI'pu'. "qaH," jatlh wa' 'ej
> pu'HIch nobHa'. vaHDaq lan vajar, Sa' bejtaHvIS.
>
> "reH Suvrup SuvwI''a'," jatlh Sa'. QuchHa'law'.[109]

wejlogh QuchHa'.

> wa'logh ghup vajar. quvDaj qaDqu'ta' Sa' 'ach Sa' ghaH 'ej SIbI' tlhIjta'.
> qeH moch neHbe'. qa'meH vIttlhegh lajmeH ghu' buSHa' vajar. jatlh "latlh De'
> vIqawchugh qaja'." pa'vo' yItta' Sa'. rInlaw' qepvam. tlhoS cha'maH wa' rep.

vaj tach ghoSnIS qar'a'?

Huh. I wrote my comments immedately as they occurred to me during my
first read-through. I went through and fixed some formatting as I read
it a second time. It wasn't until a final nit-pick scan for
punctuation that I noticed that {tlhoS cha'maH wa' rep} has an
adverbial but entirely lacks a verb.

> 'avwI'vaD jatlh vajar, "tachDaq HIDor."
>
> "mIw DaSIQ 'e' DaSap, qaH," jatlh 'avwI'.

Dang, without a {-ta'} on {DaSap} this feels like it isn't quite
complete. It's an annoying rule, but I proudly stand by the fake
linguistic traditions of Klingons from decades ago.

-- ghunchu'wI'

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