tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Mon Sep 28 18:44:37 1998
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RE: Ha'DIbaHHom
- From: "Andeen, Eric" <[email protected]>
- Subject: RE: Ha'DIbaHHom
- Date: Mon, 28 Sep 1998 18:41:28 -0700
This was not marked as KLBC, but I think this needs to be corrected.
lab K'ryntes:
>
> QapDaq "kitten" tu'pu'.
tu' 'Iv? nuqDaq tu'?
<Qap> is a verb meaning "work, function , succeed", so <QapDaq> cannot
mean anything. I'm not sure what you mean here.
You also wanted to say that YOU found the kitten.
Finally, there is a Klingon animal <vIghro'> which is close enough to a
cat that many of just use the word to mean "cat". It's sort of like
calling a panda a bear, even though it technically is not.
Here's what this sentence should be:
<somewhere>-Daq vIghro' Qup vItu'pu'.
> ghaH pol vIneH.
Klingons refer to animals (even pets) as <'oH>, not <ghaH>, but you can
drop the pronoun if you want to. You also need to say YOU want to keep
it:
vIpol vIneH.
> vISo' mong.
I understand that you hid it, but I have no idea what the the <mong> is
doing there.
> jIyIn nuqDaq Ha'DIbaHmey ghaj chaw'be'.
They don't allow pets at your place, correct. <jIyIn nuqDaq> is not
correct for "where I live", but you are better off with <juHwIjDaq> for
"at my house" anyway. Note that the Klingon <juH> is not, as far as we
know, restricted to nonattached single family dwellings, so it could
apply to appartments as well.
<Ha'DIbaHmey ghaj> is almost correct, but not quite. Who has the pet in
question? You could either say <Ha'DIbaHmey vIghaj> if you wanted to
talk about the rule as it applied to you, or <Ha'DIbaHmey lughajlu'> if
you wanted to talk about it in general. See TKD 4.2.5 for more on
<-lu'>.
Finally, the <chaw'be'> on the end needs <net> to make any sense. See
TKD 6.2.5 for more on <net> and sentences as objects. Also, instead of
<chaw'be'>, you could use <tuch>, which means "forbid" - essentially the
same thing.
Here's what you wind up with:
juHwIjDaq Ha'DIbaHmey lughajlu' net tuch.
You could also consider some different vocabulary choices here: <Saj>
for <Ha'DIbaH>, and <pol> for <ghaj>.
pagh
Beginners' Grammarian