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Re: poH Dogh wIvpu'lu'



qaSDI' 96-08-20 04:22:43 EDT, jatlh A.Appleyard:

> Star Trek Voyager 'ay' wa'DIch (paghDIch?) (= <pilot episode>) jIloSpu'qu',

<vIloSpu'qu'> bIjatlh 'e' DaHech, qar'a'?

>  'ej DaH 1996 Aug 26-Daq 'oH 'ang BBC TV2 (= England TV) - 10.50 pm 12.20
am 
> je

August 26 is not now.  Or do you mean that NOW they have SET the schedule to
show the episode then?  And I don't think you can say {*Aug 26*Daq}.  I am
quite convinced that {-Daq} should refer to spacial location only.  "On
August 26" is something of an English idiom.  There is canon to indicate that
you need merely state the time to show time context.  (CK)

>  jojDaq ramDaq QongDaqDaq chaHnISDI' HochHom'e'!! <video> wagh ghajbe'
Hoch!!

I'm not sure what {jojDaq} is doing here.  Are you trying to say "In the
middle of the night?"  If you mean "midnight," why not just say {ramjep}.  Or
are you trying to be "approximate"?  Shame on you!

Also you used {-Daq} on {ram}, which, as I stated above, I think is wrong.
 Why not say something like {ramjep QongDaqDaq HochHom tu'lu'ba'}?  Note that
I also took away the {chaH}; I dislike putting too many suffixes on pronouns,
although there really doesn't seem to be anything wrong with it.  Just my
preference, I suppose.

>  Qu'vatlh!! pemDaq vatlh Qu' vIghajmo', rammeyDaq jIQongnIS!!

Now I am sure what you mean, and you can certainly remove {-Daq} from those
time references.  And you should probably write {wa'vatlh} instead of just
{vatlh}, although the dictionary lists {vatlh} as "hundred (num)."  Any ideas
on this, people?

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Do'Ha' ghu'lIj.  'ach jIyajchu'.  qaStaHvIS *April* qorDu'wIj SuchtaH
*Germany*ngan.  ghaHvaD *Simon* ponglu'.  (*I'm going to have to get used to
that*)  nuja' <*Germany*Daq *Voyager* wa'DIch neH bejlaH>.  vaj vIja'
<*Voyager* puS vIqonta'.  Dabej DaneH'a'?>.  Seyqu'moH *Simon* 'ej ghaHvaD
*video* vInob.  Quchqu'choH.

jabbI'IDghomvam HevtaH'a' *Germany*ngan ('ej tlhIngan Hol Dajatlh'a')?  wej
*Voyager* puS DaHevpu''a'?

SuStel
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