tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Tue Sep 20 08:06:21 2011
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[Tlhingan-hol] nuq bop bom: 'ay' cha'maH Hut
I rewrote this story so many times I can't remember what happens
anymore, so this is exciting for me, at least.
Today I don't believe that I need to recap anything further than the
captain commanding the security officer to "Finish your beer and come
with me."
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"lu' HoD." jatlh ghutar. HIvje' pep 'ej wejlogh ghupqu'pu'DI' HIvje'
chIm roQ. QamchoH cha' loDpu' 'ej meHvo' mej. lojmIt leQ 'uytaHvIS
HoD, mon yaS wa'DIch 'e' tu'. qeqmeH Qu' ghov.
yIttaHvIS jatlh HoD, "ghunbogh lo' law' lojmIt DaSov'a'?
jatlh ghutar "vISov. naw'meH puchpa' tlhoy'mey laghnISmo' ghIrel,
lojmItHomvetlh vImuS jatlh."
verghDaq 'oHtaHvIS Duj'e', roD bIQ pat tebnISlu'. HIchDal
veghnISlu'chugh, qay'laH. Sarmo' nov cham, tengchaH law' rarlaHbe'
tlhIngan HIchDal. 'ej HIchDal veghDI' vay' QuQ pa'Daq tu'lu'. pIvghor
juS bIQ 'och luHbogh nov luneHbe' jonwI' HoD je. vaj Duj nIHDaq lo'
law' lojmIt tu'lu'. poStaHvIS lojmItHom, narghbe'meH muD, Surchem le'
jomlu'pu'. QIt vIHchugh, Hurvo' Surchem lu'ellaH 'och, bIQ je. 'och
chenmo' baS le', 'och teqlaH vay'. SIbI' bIQ watlhmoHwI' ghoS bIQ.
Surchemmo' narghbe' muD. Duj 'elnISbe' leHwI'. chob'a' botnISbe' 'och. lI'.[12]
wa'maH ben Dujvam SeghDaq jomlu'be'pu' Surchem. nIteb muD pollaH lo'
law' lojmIt. ngugh verghDaq Surchem ru' chu' jonwI'. 'a Som
naQbe'moHmo' lo' law' lojmIt, DaH HoSmoHmeH Surchem lulo'taH. le'mo'
Surchem, pIj HoS choHwI' QopmoH 'ach ghutarvaD pup Qu'qoq.
QIj HoD. jatlh "ghu' wI'olmeH 'ej wItI'meH mIch loS wI'elnIS 'ach
lujrupmo' Surchem, napHa' Qu'. chaq Sabpu' lojmIt 'ej lujDI' Surchem
muD polbe'. vaj maQIpbe'nIS. logh SutDaq[4] bIvumta''a'?"[7]
"logh Sut vItuQbejta', HoD!" jatlh ghutar. "jIpo'."
"DatuQta' 'e' vIghelbe'." DujDaq vumchoHpa' beq, logh Sut mIw qeqnIS.
"DatuQtaHvIS bIvumbej'a'?"
"wej. 'a vIta'rupqu'."
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SKI: Mostly background on a special forcefield used to strengthen the
hull in sector four.[10] And ghutar overstating his spacesuit experience.
[4] I feel this is kind of a cheat because the English-like mnemonic
will trigger recognition, but it still works, doesn't it? I imagine
that doing the spacesuit work is one of those things that the rookie
thinks is cool, but is really miserable scut work the captain is only
too happy to visit on the junior officer, even when he isn't hiding a
broken arm.
[7] I'm on maybe the fifth rewrite and this is finally making sense.
I'm so happy, there just had to be a footnote about it.
[10] If you look in the operating handbook for this spaceship there
will be a list of serial numbers to which this mod applies.
[12] Conversation with my husband:
Me: If there were a force field that only permitted objects to pass
one way, and you put a tube into it, could you then suck objects out
through the tube?
Him: [immediately, without pause for thought] If the tube were made
of adamantium, titanium or aluminum, yes, but if it were made of
plastic or bone, no. It has to be superconducting or nearly
superconducting to maintain a hole in the force field. If it were
made of lead or stone and it were really thick it would offer
resistance, but it could still get through.
Me: I think I'd better write this down.
Full story, with corrections from you, at http://nuqbopbom.blogspot.com
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