tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Mon Sep 19 00:53:13 2011
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[Tlhingan-hol] nuq bop bom: 'ay' cha'maH chorgh
Last episode ended with the captain remembering lying on the floor
facing the wrong end of his own pistol, during a misinterpreted
martial arts lesson.
28
yevpu' yaS wa'DIch. "qaStaH nuq?" jatlhpu'
ravvo' jatlhpu' HoD. "maqeq jIjatlhbe'pu'mo' vIHIvbej 'e' Har."
"'ej Dujeyta'!" Haghpu' yaS wa'DIch. "majQa' Hota'ro'!" jatlhpu'.
"tlhaQbe'." jatlhpu' HoD.
"ghobe'. pov. 'orlaH 'ej SuvlaH je DeghwI'ma' chu'."
"jIqIDbe'. vIbachqangbej," jatlhpu' Hota'ro'.
"Hoch jaj vIbachqang jIH, 'ach DaHjaj vIneHbe'. HoD QaQ ghaHtaHmo'
vIbachbe'. DeghwI' tlhIbHa' SoHtaHmo' DaHjaj qabachbe' je." jatlhpu'
'ungya. "Ha' jIghung. megh boSop boneH'a'?"
'ej pay' Hoch batlh choqbogh mIw'e' 'oghta' 'ungya. pu'HIch
Qeqbe'choH Hota'ro'. Sojpa' lughoSpu'. ba'choHtaHvIS Hota'ro', HoDvaD
pu'HIch nobHa'pu'.
"yIpol. Dabajta'," jatlhpu' vajar.
"SoHvaD le''a'?" tlhobpu' DeghwI'.
"ghobe'. wagh, 'ach le'be'."
"vaj yIpol" jatlhpu' DeghwI' 'ej nobHa'. megh SopchoHpu'.
QIb leghvIpwI' DataH ghaH 'ach Qobqu'ba' be'vetlh QIb 'e' Sov yaSpu'.
Hota'ro'vaD "DunISchugh vay' vInISqang," jatlhpu' HoD, nISwI' pu'HIch
HottaHvIS.
"DunISchugh vay' qaHubchu', HoD," jangpu' DeghwI'. Duj muvta'DI'
matlh 'Ipba'ta' DeghwI' 'ach DaH 'Ip tlho'laH HoD. wej wen qaSpu'DI'.
[1] reH matlh ghaH 'ach beq muvchu'be'pu'. chaq 'eDjen ghaH. chaq bIt neH.
vajar ngaSwI'Daq ratlh wornagh 'e' tu'. Hota'ro'vaD nobpu'DI'
Quchlaw'. DeghwI' yu'law'taH Hung yaS. ghaytan vangmeH 'eb jonta'mo'
DeghwI' 'ej naDta'mo' HoD, ghal Hung yaS. "jIDo neH" jatlh DeghwI'.
"jIDo'be'chugh jor pIvghor. rut luj Dupvetlh. bID gho chenmoHchugh
tajvaj, taH 'ej SeHlaH pagh. pIvghor Qaw'." Qatlh Hung yaS Qu': reH
vangrup 'ach pIj vangbe'nIS. jagh SuvlaHbogh neHba' ghutar.
ghumchoH yaS wa'DIch SeHlaw. HaStaDaq cha' 'ej jatlh "ghum mIch loS
lo' law' lojmIt Surchem." qaStaHvIS lupHom chach HoS lo'pu' wa'
Surchem. ghaytan ram. ghaytan HoS choHwI' choHnISlu' neH.
jatlh HoD. "ghutar ne', Ha'. wI'olnIS. wornaghlIj yItlhutlhchu' 'ej HItlhej."
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SKI: The captain remembers how the FO intervened in the incident with
the helmsman, and then takes the security officer to investigate an
alarm condition.
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[1] Is it clear that from <beq muvpu'DI' Hota'ro'> in 'ay' 27 to
<"DunISchugh vay' qaHubchu', HoD," jangpu' DeghwI'.> in 'ay' 28 is a
flashback/recollection. I've bracketed it with time stamps and used
the perfective like a crazy woman, but it's probably still not clear.
So hard to do. How can I better make that clear? At the time of the
action, almost every action in the anecdote is complete, hence the
pervasive perfective. pengach.
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