tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Sun Feb 09 11:00:25 2003
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Re: parmaqqay bomvaD
- From: "Sangqar (Sean Healy)" <[email protected]>
- Subject: Re: parmaqqay bomvaD
- Date: Sun, 09 Feb 2003 17:07:40 +0000
Since this wasn't marked KLBC, I'll have a go.
>parmaqqay bomvaD
Since I assume you mean "a song for (my) love" and not "a love for (my)
song", I suggest <parmaqqayvaD bom>. You may even want to explicitly state
that it is for your love, <parmaqqaywI'vaD bom>.
>qamuSHa'bej
maj
>be'*bIQpuH'a'*wI'
I'm assuming you mean "my island woman" (as opposed to, say, "my female
island") and I would say <bIQpuH'a' be'wI'>
>DalIjQo'
Although this works as "You will not forget it", I think that sentiment
would be better expressed as <not DalIj>. If however, you meant "Don't
forget it", I would say <yIlIjQo'> or even <not yIlIj>.
>loDnal QaQ jImojrup
>be'nalwI' bImoj vIneH
I think these should be <vImojrup> and <Damoj>; that is, I think the thing
you are becoming is the object of <moj>.
>qamuSHa'ba'
maj
Quvar (and/or former BG's), please correct any errors I've made in my
corrections.
-Sangqar
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