tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Sun Apr 20 16:02:19 2003
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Re: Tao Te Ching Chp. 33
ja' 'ISqu':
>latlh Sovchugh vay' val.
>Sov'eghchugh vay' jIvHa'...
>Those who know others are clever.
>Those who know themselves are enlightened...
All of these seem weaker to me than phrasing them to mirror the English:
val latlh Sovbogh vay'.
jIvHa' Sov'eghbogh vay'...
>pe'vIl tlhetlhchugh vay' ngoQ ghaj.
>Those who move ahead boldly have purpose.
Consider {Duv} instead of {tlhetlh}, and/or {ghoS} instead of {ghaj}.
-- ghunchu'wI'