KLBC--Sonnet "Live with me and be my love"

["Robert Johnson" <baraSungey@cox.net>]

Greetings,

I know that most of you do not like to touch poetry: but I am trying to woo a girl, and she loves that kind of stuff.  So I have found a piece that I think she will like.

This is the first verse (there are a total of 5 verses; I will do one verse at time), as I think it should go.  Any corrections will be much appreciated.

yIn jIH je parmaqqaywI',
'ej maH Hoch belmey tob
'e' HuDmey je ngechmey, *dales* je yotlhmey,
'ej Hoch *craggy* HuDmey *yields.

Live with me and be my love,
And we will al the pleasures prove
That hills and valleys, dales and fields,
And all the craggy mountains yields.

Thanks in advance for any and all reponses

baraSungey