Re:

[Stephan Schneider <sts@stephan-schneider.net>]

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>Date: Mon, 26 Aug 2002 09:26:30 -0500
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>HovpoH 2651.7 - DotlhwIj
>DaHjaj yIvbeH vItuQ 'e' vIwuq. meqna' vIghajbe'. neH vIneH.
>'ach povam bIr muD.  qaStaHvIS wa'Hu' ram HurDaq ratlh
>DujwIj. vIvergh 'e' vIlIjpu'. vaj bIrlaw' DujwIj qoD.

/vIvergh 'e' vIlIjpu'/ could mean "i forgot that i parked it". in 
this case you would have parked your car, but you don't remember it. 
is there a way to make it less amibious?

>tujlaw' yaHwIj muD. wa'Hu' ram jIQongchu'be', vaj jIHob.
>jIDoy'. 'oy'law' SomrawDu'wIj. <'oy' parmaq> jatlh Humanpu'.
>net Sov. 'ach qen parmaq QaQ vISIQ. qaqbej 'oy'vam.


>qen <Soj veQ> vISop. wanI'vam par luHDu'wIj. QeHchoHlaw'.
>vaj Hergh vISop. luHDu' leSmoH Herghvam, 'ach rut muDoy'moH
>je. 'ej DaH jIDoy'. 'ach Quchqa'moH luHDu'wIj vIneH.

i think that /Quchqa'moH luHDu'wIj/ may not be correct.
/Quchqa' luHDu'wIj/ could be better.

>vaj DaHjaj jIQopbej. 'ach jItaH. yIn vISIQ. Qu'wIj vISIQ.=a0
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>'ej lutvam ngoQ:
><pIj jIbep, 'ach Qu'wIj vIta'chu'. tlhIngan vIDataHvIS, Dum
>neH qoDwIjDaq Human.>

don't we need to say: /qoDwIjDaq Human tu'lu'bogh/? i'm not sure.

>HovpoH 2651.81 - taH DotlhwIj
>muDoy'qu'moH HerghwIj.  QoghIjwIjDaq 'engmey tu'lu'law'.
>'ughlaw' nachwIj. 'ej jIDum vIneHlI'.  'ach jIvumnISbejlI'!
>jIQublaHchu'be'.  jIja'choHDI', Qu'vam vIbuSHa'law'.  vogh
>jIQagh.  QaghwIj vIlughmoHmeH, vItaghqa'.  wejpuH.
>yaHwIjDaq jIDejchugh, vay' vItIch'a'?

Qapla'!

tulwI',
sts.