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RE: KLBC: First Contact [Part 1]



jatlh De'vID:

> Enough translating stories.  I'm going to try to compose my own.

majQa'

> Here goes... (The background will become clear in later parts,
> I hope, but I play the role of a <Duy'a'> "ambassador" in a 
> Klingon first contact situation.)

> tlhIngan yejquvvaD QIn potlhqu' lablI'...
> = Transmitting high priority message to Klingon High Council...

maj. lab 'Iv? yajlu' 'e' vIpIH, 'ach ngoDvam vI'ol vIneH.

> qIbHeS ngIvtaHvIS Dujmaj, ghom maH nov Segh Hujqu' jumqu' je.
> = While our ship was patrolling the galactic rim, we encountered
> a very odd and very strange alien race.

You can't put two different "adjectives" on a single noun. The limit is one.
So you would have to say something like:

Hujqu'bogh nov Segh jumqu' -OR-
Hujqu'bogh nov Segh 'ej jumqu'bogh

Your prefix on <ghom> is incorrect. The subject is <maH> and the aliens,
which all together is still first person plural, so the prefix has to be
<ma->. Also, <ghom> is defined as "encounter" among other things, and I
believe it can be used transitively, so you can say <nov Segh wIghom>
instead of <maghom maH nov Segh je>.

> toQDuj rur Dujchaj, 'ach yoylaw'.
> = Their ship resembled a Bird of Prey, 
> but was apparently upside down.
> [Ships always meet each other head on in Star Trek.  jIqID.]

reH mumISmoH wanI'vam. loghDaq wej lurghna' tu'be'lu''a'? qatlh cha' neH
lo'taH Hov leng?

OK, <lurghna'> is probably not specific enough, but I'm feeling lazy.

> maghomDI' tlhInganpu' chaHlaw' 'e' wItu'.
> = When we encountered them we at first 
> thought they were Klingons.

maj.

> DIrI' 'ej maHvaD jang, jatlh: **"Henqun?  Ham nangItlh!"
> = We hailed them, and they answered us: **"(untranslated)"

maj.

> (latlh QIn vIchuHtaHvIS, lut vIja'qa'.)
> = (To be continued.)

yItaHbej.


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