KLBC: SERGEANT CORPSES

[RKlingonWarrior@aol.com]

sorry, the email  got screwed up.  this is the original in its entireity.
when writing a compound sentence with multiple active verbs, what order 
should everything be in.  example:
HemeyDaq DIta' lommey bu'pu'  'e' QeHchu'ta' Da'Hompu'.
a word for word translation of
the routes are littered with the corpses of Sergeants who angered their 
Lance Corporals.
should it be: lommey DIta' HemeyDaq Da'Hompu' QeHchu'ta' bu'pu' 'e'   or 
should it be: Da'Hompu' QeHchu'ta' bu'pu' 'e' lommey DIta' HemeyDaq.
or should the whole prepesitional phrase after sergeants stay in a word for 
word translation?
chupmey'a'?

-veS joH