tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Sat Jan 16 23:53:07 1999
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Re: qID
In a message dated 1/16/1999 12:50:12 PM US Mountain Standard Time,
[email protected] writes:
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Qo'noS tachDaq ba'taH SuvwI' Qup. 'Iw HIq tlhutlhlI', 'ej be'pu' nejtaH.
qaStaHvIS jar jav romoluSngan neHmaHDaq ngIvmo' DujDaj, be'pu' puS leghpu'.
pa' bejtaHvIS SuvwI', wa' raSDaq be' 'IH legh, 'ej Do' mob. be' raS ghoS,
'ej ja'chuqchoH chaH. qaSDI' wejmaH tup, lupwI'HomDajDaq be'vam tlhap
SuvwI' Qup. lupwI'Hom 'elta'DI' chaH, SuvwI' merbej be'. "loD vIpoQbej!
DaH jIHvaD parmaqlIj yI'ang!!!" SuvwI' porghDaq Sup be' 'ej nga'chuqchoH.
qaStaHvIS wej rep nga'chuq chaH, 'ach wej yon be'vam.
"mev!...mev..jIleSnIS." 'e' ja' loD, 'ej lupwI'Hom 'elHa' SuvwI'.
"tugh!...tugh yIchegh!" 'e' qoy' be', lojmIt SoQmoHtaHvIS SuvwI'.
"Qu'vatlh! nuq vIta'laH?" 'e' SIv SuvwI'. "nIteb be'vam
vIyonmoHlaHbebej." ghu'Daj qeltaHvIS, latlh loD legh SuvwI'. latlh
lupwI'Hom tI' 'e' nIDtaH loDvam. lupwI'Hom ghoS SuvwI', 'ej loDvaD jatlh
SuvwI'. "lupwI'HomwIjDaq be' maw' vIghajbej! vaghlogh manga'chuqta', 'ach
yonbe'! QaHlIj vIpoQ. chogheSchugh, 'ej be'wIj Dangaghchugh, vaj
lupwI'HomlIj vItI'qang." laj loD. SuvwII' lupwI'Hom 'el loD 'ej be'
ngaghchoH. qaSDI' vagh tup, lupwI'Hom tu' chut yaS, 'ej qoD leghlaHmeH,
wovmoHwI'HomDaj chu'. qoD wovmoHDI' yaS, chang'eng leghlaHchu', 'ej
chaHvaD "nuq Suta'taH jay'!" 'e' jach ghaH. DaH QorwaghDaq chut yaS
leghlaH loD, 'ej ghaHvaD "be'nalwI' vIngaghtaHneS." ja'. "qatlh juHlIjDaq
'e' Data'laHbe'?" 'e' ghel yaS. jang loD "eerr...qabDaj DawovmoHpa'
be'nalwI' ghaH 'e' vISovbe'." >>
tlhaQ lutvam
I don't like using {tlhap} for "taking someone to another place." I would
have chosen {Dev} or even {tlha'moH}.
And, {'e'} (the pronoun) is overused. We Klingons do not use {'e'} with verbs
of speaking.
peHruS