tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Sat Jun 14 08:37:27 1997
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RE: KLBC: betleH (grammar practice but also need some information)
- From: "David Trimboli" <[email protected]>
- Subject: RE: KLBC: betleH (grammar practice but also need some information)
- Date: Sat, 14 Jun 97 02:15:48 UT
jatlh Voqrel:
> betleH chenmoH neH loDnalwI'.
While this is grammatically perfect, it is also vague to the point of being
incomprehensible without prior knowledge of your meaning. When I first read
it, I though you meant "My husband merely makes a betleH."
Using pronouns can help you here:
betleH chenmoH loDnalwI' neH ghaH.
> De'wI'Daq 'oH vIcha'laH 'ach chay' tIn 'oH
> vISovbe'.
The first part is just fine. The second bit is controversial. You're trying
to use a question as the object of the sentence, and I just don't think that's
supposed to be done. Okrand's never done it, and it seems very much a copying
of the English, so I avoid it. (I *could* be wrong, but what if I'm right?
Better safe than sorry, in this case, I think.) Also, even if it were
allowed, you forgot the pronoun {'e'} which *must* come before the second
verb, {vISovbe'}.
Unfortunately, I don't believe we have words for "size" or "dimension." We
could fiddle around with constructions like {tIntaHghach} or {machtaHghach},
but this seems very artificial to me.
Here's an idea that might help in this particular case. Note that it relies
on commands and questions rather than simply stating that you don't know
something. Much more Klingon.
chongtaHvIS betleH, Dung bIng je joj yIjuv. chuq yIjuv. HIja'.
> muQaH vay''a'?
The interrogative suffix always goes on the verb. {muQaH'a' vay'}
> My husband wants to make a betleH. I have a computer picture, but I
> don't know how big it is. Can anyone help?
Nice to see that you didn't rely on using some bogus noun for "picture."
{De'wI'Daq vIcha'laH} was excellent.
Do'Ha' betleH vIghajbe', vaj vIjuvlaHbe' jIH.
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