ja'SuStel:
>...Also, you might want to
>emphasize the fact that "I" am the one walking alone. This emphasis
>occurs in
>the original.
>
>He Hurgh yIyIttaHvIS, nIteb jIyIt jIH'e'.
This probably emphasizes it a little *too* much. :-) There's emphasis
implied merely by using the optional pronoun in the first place, and the
extra {-'e'} seems oddly extraneous.
-- ghunchu'wI'