tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Mon Apr 04 05:19:54 1994
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KSRP: Hamlet 1:1
>From: [email protected]
>Date: Sun, 03 Apr 94 18:32:39 EDT
>I've finally finished translating Act 1, Scene 1 of _Hamlet_, so before I
>send to SarahEkstrom for the KSRP, here it is, submitted for your approval,
>or at least for your commentation.
Qu'vatlh. That's my price of laziness; I'd already started a translation
of Hamlet 1:1 but didn't move fast enough. Rather than comment...
actually, until I get to commenting on yours, here's the bare-bones of the
first few dozen lines that I had; maybe you'll see something you like in
it. Note that a lot of it is incomplete; this was a working draft with all
sorts of rough ideas.
I kinda like "ram yItIv" for "good night"....
~mark
B: SaH 'Iv?
F: Qo', HIjang: yIloS/yIQam, 'ej yI'ang'egh.
B: nI'jaj ta' yIn!
F: *BernarDo*?
B: jIH/ghaH/HIja'.
F: [qaSDI'] poH [lugh] bIghoSmeH bIyeplaw'
B: DaH wa'maH cha'vatlh rep net ghuH. QongDaqlIj yIghoS, *F*.
F: choSonmo' qatlho'qu'. bIrqu', 'ej jI'IQ[bej].
B: bI'avtaHvIS tam'a'?
F: vIHbe' ghew.
B: ram yItIv.
jI'avtaHvIS mutlhejbogh latlh, *H* *M* je
Daghomchugh, <<yImoD>> yIra'.
F: vIQoylaw'. peloS/peQam! SaH 'Iv?
H: Hatlhvam juppu'.
M: ... "Denmark" toy'wI'pu' je (?)
F: ram yItIv.
M: batlh yIjaH, mang yoH.
DuSonpu' 'Iv?
F: yaHwIj ghaj *B*.
ram yItIv.
M: SuH, *B*!
B: toH, SaH'a' *H*?
H: ghopDaj.
B: batlh yIghoS/yIchol, *H*; batlh yIghoS/yIchol, *M* QaQ (?)
M: toH, DaHjaj ram narghqa''a' Dochvam?
B: pagh vIleghpu'.
M: <<Sunajba' neH>> ja' *H*.
'ej cha'logh Doch'e' wIleghpu'bogh HarQo'.
ghu'vammo' <<DaHjaj ram bI'avmeH ghotlhej>> vItlhobpu'.
narghqa'chugh nuvHey, nuQochbe', wIja'DI'.
H: (.....?) narghbe'ba'.
B: yIleS, yIba'[choH], 'ej gho'IjtaH
cha'Hu' ram lutmaj luSovchu' teSlIj.
H: Ha', maba'[choH]jaj.
jatlh *B* 'e' wI'Ij.
B: qaStaHvIS wa'Hu' ram
DaH DaqDaq 'oHbogh
SIchDI' Hovvetlh,
wa'vatlh rep---
M: yItamchoH, bIjatlh 'e' yImev. ghoSqa'!
B: Heghpu'bogh ta' rurchu'.
M: (......?) yIja', *H*.
B: ta' rurbe''a'? yItu', *H*.
H: rurchu'. mughIj 'ej muSIvmoH(?)
B: 'oHvaD/ghaHvaD jatlhlu' neHba'.
M: yIyu', *H*.
H: nuq SoH, ram narghwI' paS,
"Denmark" ta' yoH rurwI'? (?)
[chalmo'] qara': yIjatlh!
M: mawlu'[law']/Damawpu'law'.
B: pelegh! DoH.
H: yIratlh! yIjatlh, yIjatlh! qara': yIjatlh!
M: loj/ngabpu', 'ej jangQo'.
B: toH, *H*, bIHajba', 'ej DaleghvIplaw'(?).
Dochvam teH law' Doch najlu'bogh teH puS, qar'a'?
nuq DaQub?
H: joHwI'vaD jI'Ip: vIHarQo',
leghpu'be'chugh mInDu'wIj'e'.
M: ta' rurbe''a'?
H: ta' rurchu', 'ej bIrur'egh; rap ghu'vetlh.
"Norway" SuvtaHvIS, HIpvetlh'e' tuQ.
chuchDaq "Poland"-nganpu' HIvDI'
qabvetlh'e' rurchu' qabDaj.
Hajqu'.(?)
M: cha'logh, qaSDI' lupvam'e',
ma'avtaHvIS qeq(?).