tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Mon Apr 04 05:19:54 1994

Back to archive top level

To this year's listing



[Date Prev][Date Next][Thread Prev][Thread Next]

KSRP: Hamlet 1:1



>From: [email protected]
>Date: Sun, 03 Apr 94 18:32:39 EDT


>I've finally finished translating Act 1, Scene 1 of _Hamlet_, so before I
>send to SarahEkstrom for the KSRP, here it is, submitted for your approval,
>or at least for your commentation.

Qu'vatlh.  That's my price of laziness; I'd already started a translation
of Hamlet 1:1 but didn't move fast enough.  Rather than comment...
actually, until I get to commenting on yours, here's the bare-bones of the
first few dozen lines that I had; maybe you'll see something you like in
it.  Note that a lot of it is incomplete; this was a working draft with all
sorts of rough ideas.

I kinda like "ram yItIv" for "good night"....

~mark


B:      SaH 'Iv?

F:      Qo', HIjang: yIloS/yIQam, 'ej yI'ang'egh.

B:      nI'jaj ta' yIn!

F:      *BernarDo*?

B:      jIH/ghaH/HIja'.

F:      [qaSDI'] poH [lugh] bIghoSmeH bIyeplaw'

B:      DaH wa'maH cha'vatlh rep net ghuH.  QongDaqlIj yIghoS, *F*.

F:      choSonmo' qatlho'qu'.  bIrqu', 'ej jI'IQ[bej].

B:      bI'avtaHvIS tam'a'?

F:      vIHbe' ghew.

B:      ram yItIv.
        jI'avtaHvIS mutlhejbogh latlh, *H* *M* je
        Daghomchugh, <<yImoD>> yIra'.

F:      vIQoylaw'. peloS/peQam!  SaH 'Iv?

H:      Hatlhvam juppu'.

M:      ... "Denmark" toy'wI'pu' je (?)

F:      ram yItIv.

M:      batlh yIjaH, mang yoH.
        DuSonpu' 'Iv?

F:      yaHwIj ghaj *B*.
        ram yItIv.
M:      SuH, *B*!

B:      toH, SaH'a' *H*?

H:      ghopDaj.

B:      batlh yIghoS/yIchol, *H*; batlh yIghoS/yIchol, *M* QaQ (?)

M:      toH, DaHjaj ram narghqa''a' Dochvam?

B:      pagh vIleghpu'.

M:      <<Sunajba' neH>> ja' *H*.
        'ej cha'logh Doch'e' wIleghpu'bogh HarQo'.
        ghu'vammo' <<DaHjaj ram bI'avmeH ghotlhej>> vItlhobpu'.
        narghqa'chugh nuvHey, nuQochbe', wIja'DI'.

H:      (.....?) narghbe'ba'.

B:      yIleS, yIba'[choH], 'ej gho'IjtaH
        cha'Hu' ram lutmaj luSovchu' teSlIj.

H:      Ha', maba'[choH]jaj.
        jatlh *B* 'e' wI'Ij.

B:      qaStaHvIS wa'Hu' ram
        DaH DaqDaq 'oHbogh
        SIchDI' Hovvetlh,
        wa'vatlh rep---

M:      yItamchoH, bIjatlh 'e' yImev.  ghoSqa'!

B:      Heghpu'bogh ta' rurchu'.

M:      (......?) yIja', *H*.

B:      ta' rurbe''a'?  yItu', *H*.

H:      rurchu'.  mughIj 'ej muSIvmoH(?)

B:      'oHvaD/ghaHvaD jatlhlu' neHba'.

M:      yIyu', *H*.

H:      nuq SoH, ram narghwI' paS,
        "Denmark" ta' yoH rurwI'? (?)
        [chalmo'] qara': yIjatlh!

M:      mawlu'[law']/Damawpu'law'.

B:      pelegh! DoH.

H:      yIratlh!  yIjatlh, yIjatlh! qara': yIjatlh!

M:      loj/ngabpu', 'ej jangQo'.

B:      toH, *H*, bIHajba', 'ej DaleghvIplaw'(?).
        Dochvam teH law' Doch najlu'bogh teH puS, qar'a'?
        nuq DaQub?

H:      joHwI'vaD jI'Ip: vIHarQo',
        leghpu'be'chugh mInDu'wIj'e'.

M:      ta' rurbe''a'?

H:      ta' rurchu', 'ej bIrur'egh; rap ghu'vetlh.
        "Norway" SuvtaHvIS, HIpvetlh'e' tuQ.
        chuchDaq "Poland"-nganpu' HIvDI'
        qabvetlh'e' rurchu' qabDaj.
        Hajqu'.(?)

M:      cha'logh, qaSDI' lupvam'e',
        ma'avtaHvIS qeq(?).



Back to archive top level