tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Tue Dec 14 22:29:38 1993
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Ru'Dov corrections
- From: [email protected] (Nick NICHOLAS)
- Subject: Ru'Dov corrections
- Date: Wed, 15 Dec 93 14:39:47 EDT
- In-Reply-To: <[email protected]>; from "mark nudelman" at Dec 14, 93 11:10 am
A few corrections to my Ru'Dov text (thanks to Mark Nudelman).
=luHaghtaH 'ej luvaqtaH
='er latlh Hoch luleghDI'.
Put a comma betweem Hoch and luleghDI'.
='er Quj vay' jeSchoH *ru'Dov*,
=not 'e' lutuch naSwI'!
Make the "not" a "reH". Also, I've translated "any game" as Quj vay'; does
anyone object?
="ghIch wew ghajbogh *ru'Dov*wIj
Make that: ghIch wewqu'wI' *ru'Dov*wij; "ghajbogh" should have been
"Daghajbogh", which wouldn't have fit the metre.
=qaSDI' *QISmaS* 'eng ram nugh,
nugh should be nung.
HIvqa' veqlargh, and all that. If I get time today, I'll type in my thoughts
on what a Klingon Shakespeare Translation Project should look like...
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--- the Conversational Klingon tape.
Nick "I am not a Klingon. Much." Nicholas. [email protected]
nIchyon jIH. nIchyon SoHbe'. nIchyon ghaHbe'. nIchyon tlhIHbe'. nIchyon jIHqu'.