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Re: [Tlhingan-hol] mIl'oD veDDIr SuvwI': 'ay' cha' - 12. bIHeghvIpchugh, bIHeghpu'
<html><head></head><body bgcolor="#FFFFFF"><div><span class="Apple-style-span" style="-webkit-tap-highlight-color: rgba(26, 26, 26, 0.296875); -webkit-composition-fill-color: rgba(175, 192, 227, 0.230469); -webkit-composition-frame-color: rgba(77, 128, 180, 0.230469); ">On 2012-08-21, at 5:51, Rohan Fenwick - QeS 'utlh <<a href="mailto:[email protected]";>[email protected]</a>> wrote:</span><br></div><div><br></div><div></div><blockquote type="cite"><div>
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The slaves were sent out for a whole year looking for the warrior in the sabre bear pelt, and failed; so they have returned to tell roStevan.<br></div></div></blockquote><div><br></div>luSambe'pu'mo' nImya' ghaH 'e' HarlaH 'ej leSlaH. maj. <div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr">Warnings: None. From here out I'll provide warnings only when they're needed</div></div></blockquote><div><br></div>I found that providing them when they weren't needed helped me not forget them when they were. </div><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr"> (the whole story's probably only really PG </div></div></blockquote><div><br></div>Aw don't say that. I'm still holding out for the scene where 'avtanDIl and tIna'tIn make out in passionate detail, possibly on horseback. </div><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr">to Qov's MA).<br></div></div></blockquote><div><br></div>I don't know the Austraiian rating system, but the American one would probably give me an R for qImyal's impalement, and then an even harsher one for the Mahoun/'eSSIm sex scenes. Heck, it would probably get a more restrictive rating for Hota'ro walking around without a shirt than for Hota'ro' getting stabbed through the torso. I suppose it depends on camera angles. </div><div><br></div><div>And I think I had better give a content warning for this commentary. Anyone sharing the sexual squeamishness of American censors, may wish to slap me. Also, sorry QeS. But I am having a lot of fun. </div><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr">12. bIHeghvIpchugh, bIHeghpu'<br><br>jatlh toy'wI'pu': «'o 'utlh, puHmeyDaq malengpu', 'ach loDvetlh Qup wISamlaHbe'pu', vaj mabelchoHbe'pu'. yIntaHbogh vay' 'ej leghpu'bogh wIqIHbe'pu'; vaj latlh nab yI'oghneS, pItoy'laHbe'pu'mo' maH.»<br></div></div></blockquote><div><br></div>nab luta'pu'. toy'pu'. </div><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr">jang 'utlh: «muvItba'ta' puqbe'wI' mob,»</div></div></blockquote><div><br></div>I know you're going for 'only daughter' but it could be interpreted as 'lonely daughter'. How about wa'DIch QavDIch je. </div><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr"> jatlh. «mIghbogh 'ej 'upbogh qa''e' vIleghpu' jIH; jaghwI' DameH ghaH mughoSpu'; mungeHba'pu' QI'tu'. tagha', pay' qechmeywIj 'It lughImlu', vaj DaH vISaHbe'choHlaH!»<br></div></div></blockquote><div><br></div>maj. nab lIjbe'pu'. </div><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr">jatlhDI', lop qaSqa'moHlu' </div></div></blockquote><div><br></div>lopno'! majQa'!</div><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr">'ej ghurmoHtaH bel. Datvo' voDleH[1] quS'a' pa'Daq bom muchwI', qul mI'wI' lurItlu'; nobmey law' lunoblu'. not nobqangwI' nIv boghmoHta' QI'tu'! </div></div></blockquote><div><br></div>chay' mIpvam boSpu' voDleH? rup 'ej nobqa'taH. </div><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr">qaStaHvIS wanI', pa'DajDaq ba'taH 'avtanDIl, yIvbeHDaj neH tuQtaHvIS. </div></div></blockquote><div><br></div>jIHaghqu'! pa'Daq ba'taHvIS loD, yopwaH tuQbe'taHvIS nuq ta'taH? nejtaHvIS voDleH toy'wI'pu', pIj tIna'tIn leghpu' 'ach wej tlhob 'e' ngIl. What's Klingon for 'box of Kleenex and bottle of lotion'?</div><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr">bomtaH ghaH, loptaH, HurDagh yachtaH.</div></div></blockquote><div><br></div>Dejchu' Qov HaghtaHvIS. So that's what they call it in the Empire. Poor 'avtanDIl. </div><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr"> tugh pa'Daj ghoS tIna'tIn </div></div></blockquote><div><br></div>lojmIt Damup 'e' yIlIjQo', be'! pay' 'avtanDIl HurDagh Dalegh DaneHbe'. </div><div>(Apparently your explicit non warning hasn't stunted my imagination any).</div><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr">... toy'wI''a',</div></div></blockquote><div><br></div>Do'. </div><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr"> 'ej jatlh ghaH: «DurIt voDleHwI', lav 'IH rurbogh porgh ghajwI', naghboch pup rurbogh qab ghajwI'.»<br></div></div></blockquote><div><br></div>DuneH, 'avtanDIl!</div><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr">QInvam Dun QoyDI' 'avtanDIl, belqu'choH.</div></div></blockquote><div><br></div>'ej rIn Qu'Daj. </div><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr"> QamchoH ghaH; nIvbogh wepDaj 'ej nguvqu'bogh<span class="Apple-style-span" style="-webkit-tap-highlight-color: rgba(26, 26, 26, 0.292969); -webkit-composition-fill-color: rgba(175, 192, 227, 0.230469); -webkit-composition-frame-color: rgba(77, 128, 180, 0.230469);"> tuQ'eghmoH</span></div></div></blockquote><div><br></div>yopwaH yIlIjQo', 'avtanDIl. </div><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr">. tagha' jul'a'Daj qIHmo' belqu'choH je; </div></div></blockquote><div><span class="Apple-style-span" style="-webkit-tap-highlight-color: rgba(26, 26, 26, 0.296875); -webkit-composition-fill-color: rgba(175, 192, 227, 0.230469); -webkit-composition-frame-color: rgba(77, 128, 180, 0.230469); "><br></span></div><div>qaSpu'<span class="Apple-style-span" style="-webkit-tap-highlight-color: rgba(26, 26, 26, 0.296875); -webkit-composition-fill-color: rgba(175, 192, 227, 0.230469); -webkit-composition-frame-color: rgba(77, 128, 180, 0.230469); "> DIS 'ej wej qIHqu'pu'? loD vIvup. </span><br></div><div><span class="Apple-style-span" style="-webkit-tap-highlight-color: rgba(26, 26, 26, 0.296875); -webkit-composition-fill-color: rgba(175, 192, 227, 0.230469); -webkit-composition-frame-color: rgba(77, 128, 180, 0.230469); "><br></span></div><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr">not nIteb tay'pu' 'avtanDIl tIna'tIn je.</div></div></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr">'IHwI' bejlaHchugh 'ej bangDajDaq SumlaHchugh, belchoHbej vay'. HemtaHvIS 'ej jaqtaHvIS,</div></div></blockquote><div><br></div>Do' DaH jeqbe'taHvIS. </div><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr"> tIna'tIn jaH 'avtanDIl'e'; </div></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>voDleH Such. potlh wanI'. </div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr">paghmo' tuH ghaH. </div></div></blockquote><div><br></div>yopwaH tuQbe'taH'a'?</div><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr">be'vamvaD pIj SaQpu', pIj 'IQpu', pIj 'Itpu'; DaH, tagha' leghlaH.</div></div></blockquote><div><br></div>yIjottaH 'avtanDIl. 'eblIj yInatlhQo'. </div><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr"> ba'taHvIS nIvwI' ghajbe'bogh be'vetlh'e', 'IQlaw'. wov, 'ej chal 'ul rur; </div></div></blockquote><div><br></div>chal 'ul rur. Qob'a'?</div><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr">tlhoS maS luSo' tIHHeyDaj. porghDaj lang </div></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Daj. langwI' maS 'avtanDIl. be' Ha'DIbaH yap vImaS jIH. </div></div><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><span class="Apple-style-span" style="-webkit-tap-highlight-color: rgba(26, 26, 26, 0.296875); -webkit-composition-fill-color: rgba(175, 192, 227, 0.230469); -webkit-composition-frame-color: rgba(77, 128, 180, 0.230469); ">vel nItbogh veDDIr nIv; volchaHDajvo' HuS waghqu'law'bogh ngup tIS. 'ach 'IHmoHmeH 'ut neH qIjbogh 'ej tIq charghbogh Huy'Du'Daj'e', </span></blockquote><div><br></div>"Doj nguplIj tIna'tIn. ravwIjDaq nIvlaw'."</div><div><br></div><div><blockquote type="cite"><span class="Apple-style-span" style="-webkit-tap-highlight-color: rgba(26, 26, 26, 0.296875); -webkit-composition-fill-color: rgba(175, 192, 227, 0.230469); -webkit-composition-frame-color: rgba(77, 128, 180, 0.230469); ">tIqbogh 'ej mongDaj Dechbogh jIbDaj'e' je.</span><br></blockquote><div><br></div>'avtanDIl vIvup. 'oy'ba' tIqDaj. </div><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr">Qublaw'taH 'ej tamtaH ghaH, ba'taHvIS 'ej choljaH Doq tuQtaHvIS. 'avtanDIl van ghaH, ghIq QamchoH 'ej pe'vIlHa' 'avtanDIl ba'choHmoH. </div></div></blockquote><div><br></div>tlhoS jorbeH 'avtanDIl tIq. </div><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr">nguqHa' 'ej vuvtaH 'avtanDIl, ba'DI'. bejchuq qabchaj; belchoHchu' 'avtanDIl, bangna'Daj bejtaHvIS.<br>jatlh loD: «'o muSeHchu'bogh be''a', chay' qajatlhlaH? jul ghomchugh maS'e', natlhlu'pu' 'ej ngabqu'law'. </div></div></blockquote><div><br></div>I'm not quite following how the sun overwhelming the moon is a specific complement to tIna'tIn, when 'avtanDIl says it, unless it's just universally understood that she is the sun. </div><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr">DaH jIHvo' mu'mey natlhlu'pu' 'ej ngabchoHlaw' yabwIj'e'. vaj Du'IQmoHpu'bogh wanI', DuQuchqa'moHlaHbogh mIw je HIjatlh.»<br></div></div></blockquote><div><br></div>'IQ'a'? 'IQ tIna'tIn wej net Del. </div><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr">--------<br>[1] Henceforth I'm using voDleH instead of joH'a'. 'Cause I can. The petty lords will remain as jawpu'<br></div></div></blockquote><div><br></div>maj. <br><br><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr">--------<br>SKI: roStevan decides the warrior in the sabre bear pelt was just an evil spirit, and so calls for the celebrations to start anew. But tIna'tIn isn't so sure and summons 'avtanDIl to her to help ease her heart's continuing pain.<br></div></div></blockquote><br></div><div>Careful. Your summary just gave out info that the reader doesn't have. I wanted to spend the day imagining that she had summoned him for a quickie in the throne room. </div><div><br></div><div>I'm off to google Rustaveli slash fiction now. I'll try to be better behaved with respect to the next 'ay'. </div></body></html>_______________________________________________
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