tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Thu Oct 20 10:00:49 2011
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Re: [Tlhingan-hol] nuq bop bom: 'ay' vaghmaH chorgh: <chaw'>
At 05:48 20/10/2011, you wrote:
On Wed, Oct 19, 2011 at 11:41 AM, Qov <[email protected]> wrote:
> For this part, was going to try using the one sentence per line style
> ghunchu'wI' uses instead of the English paragraphing style I have been
> using, but it came out oddly when it was one line of dialogue with multiple
> sentences in it. I've used it for the beginning and then stopped. What do
> you think?
Huj. laDwI' Qu' vIngeDmoHmeH mIw vIlo', 'ach nom vIlaD jIH 'e' nIS.
ngeDbej 'ach mach Do. rInDI' Hoch mu'tlhegh vIqaghlu'. chaq laDmeH
mIwwIj vIchoHlaH.
chaq jaS bIqon je. bIqonDI' vItIv 'ach Huj 'e' luqeSmo' cha' nuv,
DIvI' Hol mIw vIlo'taH.
> "yuQDaq jIQol..."
> "HIjol."
lughchu' <HIjol>. lughbejbe' <jIQol>.
vaj qaq'a' jIjol?
> "chaw' qanob," jatlh 'eSSIm. "yI'el."
qatlh yabwIjDaq bom'eghchoH "Eagles - Take It Easy"?
'eSSIm QoQ jan DaQoylaw'.
> "pujmoHchugh vaj pujtaHvIS Suv 'e' ghojnIS."
pupHa' <Suv 'e' ghojnIS>. qaq <SuvmeH ghojnIS> qar'a'?
pujtaHvIS SuvlaH'a'? ghobe'? vaj pujtaHvIS Suv 'e' ghojnIS.
<SuvmeH ghojnIS> bIjatlhDI' <SuvmeH nuq ghojnIS?> jIjatlh.
> Huv 'e' 'olpu'DI' wejlogh chu'wI' 'uy.
De' vIHutlhlaw'. qatlh reH wejlogh chu'?
vISovbe'. DajDI' wejlogh chu'mo' DaH wa'logh voqvIp'a'? wejlogh parHa'?
I took a while to decide whether this was more equivalent to slipping
her a roofie or to making sure the handcuffs can be opened without a
key. It's interfering with her without her consent, but she has
indicated that she's willing, so it's really a safety precaution.
Mahoun is the most morally ambiguous character I've ever written.
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