tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Wed Oct 19 08:45:38 2011
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[Tlhingan-hol] nuq bop bom: 'ay' vaghmaH chorgh: <chaw'>
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For this part, was going to try using the one sentence per line style
ghunchu'wI' uses instead of the English paragraphing style I have been
using, but it came out oddly when it was one line of dialogue with
multiple sentences in it. I've used it for the beginning and then
stopped. What do you think?<br><br>
Mahoun has just arranged to meet 'eSSIm to pick up his Imperial Klingon
Grain Purchasing Permit.<br>
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58<br><br>
chob'a'Daq QeDpIn legh Mahoun.<br>
jatlh QeDpIn <br>
?tIr vIqeltaH. <br>
chovnatlh vIghajbe'mo' ngermey maw' vI'oghtaH. <br>
chaq SuQbe' tIr 'a SopwI' choHlaH.?<br><br>
jatlh HoD, ?chay' choH??<br><br>
jatlh QeDpIn <br>
?HoSghajmoH? <br>
SuvvIpmoH? <br>
chaq tlhIngan boQqangmoH. <br>
vISovbe'.?[36]<br><br>
Qub HoD. <br>
chob'a' tlhoy'Daq loQ ro' mup. <br>
jatlh <br>
?DuHbe'! <br>
muvuQ tlhInganvam.<br>
jIHojHa' 'e' vIchID 'a mungejta'be'.?<br><br>
jatlh QeDpIn <br>
?naDev Soj DaSoppu'pa' DuvuQ. <br>
Hoch DuH vIqel neH. <br>
tlhInganvaD nuH mojlaH tIr.?<br><br>
jatlh HoD. ?yuQDaq jIQol. Suy chaw' munob tlhIngan. chaq SoHvaD tIr De'
vISuqlaH.?<br><br>
?tIrDaj chovnatlh DaSuqlaHchugh HInob.? jatlh QeDpIn. <br><br>
?luq,? jatlh HoD jolpa' luSIchDI'. ?HIjol.? Quv nob.<br><br>
jolpat ravDaq gho'taHvIS HoD jatlh ?meHvaD yIjatlh qaStaHvIS wa' rep
HISujQo'. 'a HungpIn yIja'Qo'.?<br><br>
?lu',? jatlh QeDpIn. ?qatlh wep Daqem? ghorDaq tujqu'mo'
'utbe'bej.?<br><br>
jatlh HoD. ?nob qat. yIrIH.? wewchoH pa' 'ej wewbe'choHDI' yotlhmey moj.
Mahoun qIp tuj. yu'egh rur. 'eSSIm qachDaq yIttaHvIS lutu' Sung puS.
lubej 'a nISbe'. tugh 'eSSIm qach SIch. lojmIt qIpmeH ro' lo'. poSmoH
'eSSIm. Ha'DIbaH DIr chIS tuQtaH. Dat QeyHa' 'ej tlhopDaq bID poStaH.
porghDaj Dun Ho' Mahoun. chIch much'eghbe'chugh vaj pImchu' tlhIngan
be'pu' yelwIyyIt be'pu' je. qaSqa'law' cha'Hu. Quch yIQmoHta'be'chugh
tuj, DaH yIQbej. yopwaH lISnISchoH. jatlh ?'ey.?<br><br>
?'ey nuq?? jatlh 'eSSIm 'a yajba'.<br><br>
?yel Hol mu' 'oH? jatlh Mahoun. ?<DaH chaw' HInob> 'oS.?<br><br>
?chaw' qanob,? jatlh 'eSSIm. ?yI'el.? qach 'elpu'DI' qoD bIr law' Hur bIr
puS. <br><br>
?qaq,? jatlh Mahoun. ?naDev bIrmo' jIbel.?<br><br>
?tuj cherghnISlaH SuvwI',? jatlh 'eSSIm. ?pujmoHchugh vaj pujtaHvIS Suv
'e' ghojnIS.? <br><br>
'eb ghov Mahoun. jatlh ?bIpujtaHvIS bISuv 'e' DatIv'a'??<br><br>
?'utbe' bel,? jatlh 'eSSIm. ?vISIQqang.? De'wI'Hom lellI' 'eSSIm. raSDaq
lan 'ej lIS. ?naDev yISen,? jatlh.<br><br>
jIH SenmeH 'eSSIm retlhDaq Qam Mahoun. nIH SenwI' muchtaHvIS, HIch
So'bogh wep qeQmoH poS ghop. Huv 'e' 'olpu'DI' wejlogh chu'wI' 'uy. <br>
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SKI: Essim and Mahoun are each sleazy in their own ways, and for their
own reasons.<br>
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times">[36] Stranger things happen in real
life. There's a parasite that only reproduces in cats. If it gets into
another animal, it apparently changes their brain to make them like cats
more, so that it can get back into a cat. Hence crazy cat ladies and rats
that are attracted to cats.
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<a href="http://www.nytimes.com/2007/12/09/magazine/09_10_catcoat.html";>
http://www.nytimes.com/2007/12/09/magazine/09_10_catcoat.html</a>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times">I find it a little bit annoying when
real life is too unbelievable to use in a story.<br>
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