tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Fri Jan 09 04:36:37 1998
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Re: Poetry
ja'pu' Eduardo Fonseca:
>I mean: "During the life of my eyes which are very tired".
> Doy'qu'bogh qaStaHvIS mInDu'wIj'e' yIn
ja' qelayn:
>I would phrase this, thus.
> qaStaHvIS Doy'qu'bogh mInDu'wIj'e' yIn
Better, but you probably should have waited for Qov to respond. While
you corrected the position of {Doy'qu'bogh}, you didn't fix another big
error. As a Type 5 noun suffix, {-'e'} is never placed on the first
noun of a noun-noun construction (TKD p31).
Since {Doy} can act as an adjective, I'd say {yIntaHvIS mInDu'wIj Doy'qu'}
if I had a need to translate this particular phrase. But I really doubt I
would ever have such a need.
-- ghunchu'wI'