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Re: KBLC (old): " Qu'Hom " : lutHomwIj wa'DIch.





I must sincerely thank you (HoD trI'Qal) for the time and energy
you have spent on this!
Also ~mark (Shoulson) for his supplementary comments...

>I hope you revise this and send it in again.  
>Or even tell us what happens next. ;)

Because it is my first (and so far only) substantial composition
in tlh. H., and the fact that (grammar aside) I was pretty proud 
of what I could come up story-wise (OK, don't laugh; I neither
pretend nor aspire to be a literary genius!), I would like to fix
it and send it again for further criticism or approval.
I will take careful notice of your comments and ~mark's, and send in
the entire thing shortly!

SoHvaD tlho'wIj vInob.                    ...Paul M...



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