tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Wed Jul 11 00:00:35 2012
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Re: [Tlhingan-hol] nuq bop bom: 'ay' cha'vatlh wejmaH cha': 'Iv Davoq?
I'm going to go back and reread all of this lut'a'. I swear.
ghItlhpu' Qov, jatlh:
> CONTENT: blood and broken bones
"Poke her... with the soft cushion!"
taH:
> ghor'a' jan? ghobe'. ghorpu' Hom.
I'm pretty sure we only have {ghor} as a transitive in canon: {pIpyuS yIghor!},
{pel'aQDaj ghorpa'}, and such.
> loQ mIm 'oy' 'ach Dachbe'. jachchoH
> vajar. qImyal pIlmoHlaw'mo' vajar beymey, tamchoH
> 'e' nID vajar, 'ach lugh Sa'. beymey botlaHbe'.
> qaStaHvIS lup law' jachtaH ghIq QopchoHmo' 'oy'
> noch, Hugh je tamchoH 'ach bechtaH. poS lIS Sa'
> 'ej taghqa' 'oy'. qImyal qab bejtaH vajar. ngaghtaH
> 'e' tIvbogh be' nong rur.
And you claim you don't like writing torture...
...(poD vay')
> bechlaHtaH neH vajar. QotchoH 'ej nogh.
wot {nogh} vImuSHa'qu'. pIjHa' wIlo'laH 'ach lI'qu'!
> QeyHa'moH. teqDI' yaDvo' mej DIr, 'Iw,
> yaDpachDu'[277] je 'ach ta'be'mo' qImyal, 'oy' SIQlaH vajar.
I probably would have passed by {yaDpachDu'} without comment!
> «jolpat chu'Ha'ta'mo' ngaH maQollaHbe'.
qaStaHvIS 'op Hogh puS lut 'ay'mey vIlaDpu'bogh, vaj... pong 'oH'a' {ngaH}'e'?
> DayItlaH 'e' DaHar'a', HoD?» jatlh ghutar.
*Da*yItlaH?
> jatlh, «loQ. 'ach tlhoy bISuD'eghlI'.
yap {bISuDlI'} 'e' vIHar. loQ Hujlaw' {bISuD'eghlI'}.
This story needs publishing. NEEDS it. I'm yet again awed not just by your
ability with the language's grammar, but your expressiveness in its nuances.
When's it come out in paperback? ;)
QeS 'utlh
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