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Re: KLBC: Octopus (final draft)



ja' David <[email protected]>:
>yab Qatlh ghaj *octopus*, 'ach pip ghajbe'.
>chorgh DeSDu' tiq ghaj.

As a matter of style, I find {ghaj} to be one of the most overused 
verbs in the Klingon language.  I usually prefer to find a more 
descriptive and "active" replacement.  When there is another verb 
acting adjectivally in the sentence, I think it is often more 
straightforward to make it the main verb instead.  For example:

Qatlh "octopus" yab, 'ach pIp Hutlh "octopus".
tIq chorgh DeSDu'Daj.

For beginning/learning sentences, {ghaj} is probably perfectly 
appropriate.  I don't complain about style when reading English 
primers' simple and repetitive sentences, and I shouldn't do it for 
Klingon either.

-- ghunchu'wI' 'utlh



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