tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Tue Feb 03 09:23:56 1998
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Re: QonoS ra'wI' QIv baroS
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- Subject: Re: QonoS ra'wI' QIv baroS
- Date: Tue, 3 Feb 1998 12:14:58 EST
>}De' De'wI' wISuqmeH...
>In order to get an information computer? What's that?
Oops! That should be <De'wI' De'>, the computer's information.
>} jabbI'ID rInmoH *BJ*, 'ej vIcheghmoH.
> You could say here {De' lI'chu' *BJ*} or another verbal construction
indicating >complete sending, rather than using a noun to describe an action.
I was trying to indicate a downloading of information from the computer, and
in my first re-write I've changed this to <De' Hev rInmoH *BJ*>, "BJ finished
receiving the data".
>}Do', lupDujHom QIjqu' *Michael* 'ej *Shiloh*Daq macheghlaH.
>lupDujHom SeHlaHbe'mo' nagh QIjnIS'a'?
HIvqa' veqlargh! That ought to read, <QIHqu'be'> ... "Fortunately, Michael
didn't seriously damage the shuttlecraft..." Not only did I typo, I dropped a
<be'>! Oy!
I'll be sure to give the English next time. Thanks ever so much for your
critique of my little log-thing.
Sydney!
a.k.a. Lt. Cdr. Sarah Barrows, Starfleet
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