tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Sat Jun 29 09:52:44 1996
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Speed Kills
- From: [email protected] (Alan Anderson)
- Subject: Speed Kills
- Date: Sat, 29 Jun 1996 11:56:19 -0500
Soqra'tIS writes:
>Do'a' HoH. *Windows95*'e' yIleQ yInpu' yItoD 'ej <--I think. Corrections
>please.
>Speed kills. Switch to Windows95 and save lives!
"Speed" is the subject, so it comes after the verb. {HoH Do'a'}.
I like the augmented meaning of "great velocity" a lot.
{leQ} is a noun. How about {lo'choH} "change to use" instead?
I don't think a "life" is capable of using language; it should probably
be {yInmey}. Even if {-pu'} were appropriate, {-mey} gets across an idea
of scattered, independent lives.
{'ej} and other verb conjunctions come between sentences. I'm not sure
this is a good place for a conjunction though; a purpose clause might be
better.
{HoH Do'a'. yInmey DatoDmeH, "Windows 95" yIlo'choH.}
-- ghunchu'wI' batlh Suvchugh vaj batlh SovchoH vaj