Does this sound right?

[":�" <bdixon@atcon.com>]

Hi,
        I am trying to find a name for myself that suits my personality.  I
have come up with one but I'm not sure if I used proper grammer: 

The name in Klingon is:  qeq je Sun
The name in English: military drill and discipline


is this right? 

Qapla'
Paul Dixon