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[Tlhingan-hol] Vows

Elizabeth Lawrence ([email protected]) [KLI Member]



<div dir="ltr">I&#39;m working on some Klingon wedding vows, and I&#39;d like a second opinion.  <div><br></div><div>DaHjaj  qanay<div>DaHjaj  qaSaw<br></div><div>jIyIntaHvIS  bangwI’  SoHtaH<br></div><div>reH  qatlhej  ‘e’  vI’Ip<br>
</div><div>reH  SoHvaD  jISuv  ‘e’  vI’Ip<br></div><div>reH  juHwIj’e’  juHlIj  ‘oH  ‘e’  vI’Ip<br></div><div>pIj maHaghmeH jIvum &#39;e&#39; vI&#39;Ip<br></div><div>reH  maQaHchuq  ‘e’  ma’Ip<br></div><div>DaHjaj qorDu&#39; chu&#39; wIchenmoH<br>
</div></div><div><br></div><div>I&#39;d like to know if there are any general or grammatical errors, but I also have some more specific questions.  I don&#39;t like the phrasing of pIj maHaghmeH jIvum &#39;e&#39; vI&#39;Ip, but I wanted a sentiment about laughter, and I couldn&#39;t think of anything better, so any suggestions would be appreciated.  Also, I&#39;m not sure I like the mixture of first and second person, but I&#39;m not sure how to rephrase.</div>
<div><br></div><div>Thanks,</div><div>be&#39;&#39;elth</div></div>
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