tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Tue May 27 19:53:55 2014
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[Tlhingan-hol] Vows
- From: Elizabeth Lawrence <[email protected]>
- Subject: [Tlhingan-hol] Vows
- Date: Tue, 27 May 2014 14:20:54 -0400
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<div dir="ltr">I'm working on some Klingon wedding vows, and I'd like a second opinion. <div><br></div><div>DaHjaj qanay<div>DaHjaj qaSaw<br></div><div>jIyIntaHvIS bangwI’ SoHtaH<br></div><div>reH qatlhej ‘e’ vI’Ip<br>
</div><div>reH SoHvaD jISuv ‘e’ vI’Ip<br></div><div>reH juHwIj’e’ juHlIj ‘oH ‘e’ vI’Ip<br></div><div>pIj maHaghmeH jIvum 'e' vI'Ip<br></div><div>reH maQaHchuq ‘e’ ma’Ip<br></div><div>DaHjaj qorDu' chu' wIchenmoH<br>
</div></div><div><br></div><div>I'd like to know if there are any general or grammatical errors, but I also have some more specific questions. I don't like the phrasing of pIj maHaghmeH jIvum 'e' vI'Ip, but I wanted a sentiment about laughter, and I couldn't think of anything better, so any suggestions would be appreciated. Also, I'm not sure I like the mixture of first and second person, but I'm not sure how to rephrase.</div>
<div><br></div><div>Thanks,</div><div>be''elth</div></div>
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